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Sam and Dean at the Movies, for TheYmp

Aug 11, 2016 09:00

Title: Sam and Dean at the Movies
Recipient: TheYmp
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1200
Warnings: None
Summary: Written for the prompt: "The brothers are watching a horror film. They're not impressed. Until suddenly they're creeped out." Pretty much exactly that.

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Comments 14

madebyme_x August 11 2016, 17:10:06 UTC

Great brotherly banter, you captured their voices so very well! And I love the idea of a theater in their 'man cave'!!!

Thank you for sharing :)

brunettepet August 11 2016, 17:42:43 UTC

I really like how Dean went into this so enthusiastic and playful but got more serious and introspective seeing reminders on the screen.

It really is sad to think of all the dead men of letters this bunker has housed but if they're still hanging around they might enjoy a man cave theater right along with our guys.

kalliel August 11 2016, 17:45:28 UTC

I've never seen The Others, but I like the idea of the air in the bunker being chock full of ghosts--the sheer barometric pressure of them. And I love the all-dialogue styling of this. :)

amberdreams August 11 2016, 21:42:15 UTC

I've never seen The Others because I think I'd find it too creepy - especially if Dean Winchester is disturbed by it! The dialogue only idea works really well, you've got their voices spot on so I was never confused about who was speaking. I loved all the to and fro about the pop corn and how it gradually became more serious. I reckon Dean isn't going to get away with not expanding on his purgatory memories later on though!

theymp August 11 2016, 23:28:00 UTC

What a great story! The banter positively sparked of the page and the voices were spot on.

I love 'The Others', it's such a wonderfully creepy, claustrophobic film -- I've seen it several times, but not for a while -- and ironically I just noticed it on Netflix a couple of days ago and thought I should get around to watching it again! I definitely have to watch it again now!

Loved all the little touches like Dean's reference to getting 'four hours' sleep, Sam holding out in the face of Dean's enthusiasm for a 'man cave', but then leaping at a chance to talk feelings, and Dean's obvious wobble and slight case of anxiety at the end.

Thank you!