Our first gift of 2016, in a bounty of many! :D
Title: Hunt Smart
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anactoriaRating: PG
Word Count: ~3800
Warnings: S11 spoilers! Super minor swearing, brief mentions of gore without being heavily described
Author's Notes: I hope my recipient likes this piece! I had so much fun writing it. She had so many great prompts, I wish I could have done
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I love your Claire, anon. Her determination, her inner monologue, her sense of injustice, using her delinquent-teen skills for hunting purposes, following the letter of Jody's rules while breaking them anyway -- you just captured her so well. Dean and Sam's reactions to her hunting felt very them as well, and Dean trying to protect her from the truth (and that not working at all) rang so true. And her encounter with Lucifer felt genuinely tense and scary -- I was so relieved when Cas managed to take control, and I'd like to believe he could break out of his apathy if Claire was in danger.
I really appreciate the ending, as well. She might have got in over her head this time, but she's a capable girl, and it's wonderful to imagine her pulling a Buffy and studying while kicking ghostly ass. ;)
Thanks again, anon -- I'm so glad you liked the prompts, and so happy with this great story. ♥ ♥ ♥
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I love the little details about her skills as a delinquent, Jody's rules about feet on the bed, Lucy's "Ah, so you've heard of me?" :-) Great characterization all around, but especially the ever-good-value Lucifer.
Wonderful job, author! And a great kick-off to the best exchange around! YASSS.
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And Castiel *would* fight for her.
*hugs them both*
Loved it!
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Loved this!! Great work!!
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