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Too Long in the Wasteland, for sophiap (part two)

Aug 03, 2015 14:31

[Too Long in the Wasteland, part 2]

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2015:fiction

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dridri93 August 3 2015, 19:02:54 UTC

Oh. My. Goodness. This was amazing! I loved all of the worldbuilding you included - the ways life had changed in the centuries since civilization as we knew it had collapsed, and how Dean managed to keep the Bunker running.

Let me just say that the ending had me smiling like a loon. Sam came back! Dean's finally able to have peace! THEY HAD CAS RESTORE THE WORLD'S LARGEST BALL OF TWINE! MAYOR TRISHA IS SAM'S DESCENDANT!

I also just love this partial line (I may or may not have giggled like a small child): "where the noise of a motor car revving its engine and music that was definitely not Angelic harps could be heard." I just...no, 80's rock wouldn't be Angelic harps. xDDDD

I loved it, anon author! Great job all around!

manzanita_crow August 3 2015, 20:34:44 UTC

THEY HAD CAS RESTORE THE WORLD'S LARGEST BALL OF TWINE! MAYOR TRISHA IS SAM'S DESCENDANT!
Yep :D

zara_zee October 4 2015, 04:46:31 UTC

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed. :D

zara_zee October 4 2015, 04:44:46 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so happy to hear that you enjoyed the world-building. When I realised that the World's Largest Ball of Twine was near Lake Waconda, it just had to be part of the story, so I'm glad that part hit the right note. :)
And I figured that when Dean got to Heaven Baby and his tunes would be waiting there for him!

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

jennytork August 3 2015, 19:22:23 UTC

I am crying in the best way.

Thank you so much for this.

I needed this today.

zara_zee October 4 2015, 04:45:54 UTC

Happy to hear you enjoyed the story and that it provoked some positive emotion! Thank you so much for reading and commenting. :)

crucis01 August 3 2015, 19:40:58 UTC

This, this was AWESOME! Fantastic storytelling. Thank you for sharing

zara_zee October 4 2015, 04:47:00 UTC

Thank you! And thank you so much for reading and commenting. :D

zubeneschamali August 3 2015, 19:44:50 UTC

This was wonderful, along with just about the best ending ever. I loved it!

zara_zee October 4 2015, 04:47:36 UTC

Thank you! So glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks so much for reading and commenting. :D

galwithglasses August 3 2015, 20:38:28 UTC

Giant ball of twine!!!! Riveting story and I love the connections with Trisha and Ruby. Your place among the Storytellers would be assured.

zara_zee October 4 2015, 04:49:53 UTC

Thank you so much. That's very kind! Glad you got a kick out of the Giant Ball of Twine! :) Thank you for reading and commenting.