worn for sleeping, for TammyRenH

Sep 11, 2014 08:00

Title: worn for sleeping
Recipient: TammyRenH
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1300 words
Warnings: mention of show-level violence
Author's Notes: TammyRenH, I suspect this is not quite the direction you were expecting this prompt to go, but once it occurred to me I couldn’t not write it. I hope you enjoy it. :)

Summary: It takes three tubes of paint - ( Read more... )

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themegalosaurus September 11 2014, 14:14:10 UTC
ARGH!! This was so amazing! So sad but such a great idea and something I haven't seen before at all. I love it.

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snickfic November 1 2014, 22:44:55 UTC
Yeah, once I had the idea, I wondered why I hadn't read SPN fic from the ghost's POV before. Surely it must exist? But I couldn't remember seeing it.

Anyway, thank you very much. :)

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nagi_schwarz September 11 2014, 14:19:41 UTC
That was intense. A pretty amazing perspective of Jess.

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snickfic November 1 2014, 22:45:10 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed. :)

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kalliel September 11 2014, 14:37:06 UTC
This is amaaaaaazing. <3333 I got about a third of the way down the page and suddenly realized what was going on, and I was just like OH JESS, JESS, BB. <333 D; This is amazing, and also amazing. And this is the dumbest comment ever, so dear author, remind me when reveals go up to come back when I have gotten over my emphatic wailing so I can say more! This fic deserves far better than I've articulated so far. Pure excellence!

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safiyabat September 11 2014, 14:40:55 UTC
This was intense, and so so sad.

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snickfic November 1 2014, 22:46:29 UTC
Thank you for the lovely comment. :)

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snickfic November 1 2014, 22:46:11 UTC
:DDDDD I am extra pleased that I was able to write something you liked so much without ever guessing it was me. I AM SMUG. :D

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quickreaver September 11 2014, 14:41:36 UTC
SO GOOOOOOD! What a gorgeous, perfectly in-character sad little slice of life! Well played, summergenner!

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snickfic November 1 2014, 22:46:50 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

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septembers_coda September 11 2014, 16:06:42 UTC
HOLY. SMOKES. Wow, I loved every word of this, from the perfect title, to the repeated worry, the tiny, niggling idea that is something wrong, from something so small as the fact that Jess doesn't wear nightgowns. A good observation about the show, actually-- why would a sporty, modern type of girl who normally sleeps in boy shorts and a (albeit artfully/sexily) torn Smurfs T-shirt suddenly have a 50s-style, lacy white satin nightgown ( ... )

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snickfic November 7 2014, 23:28:11 UTC
I can't tell you how happy this comment made me. The fic isn't very long, but I had a lot I wanted it to mean, and I am absolutely ecstatic to find out that so much of it came through to you.

I actually didn't sit down with the idea of deconstructing that white nightie from the pilot; the first line about Jess not having a nightgown basically wrote itself. But then I liked it and wanted to develop it, because the show's use of the white nightgown, innocent-lamb-to-the-slaughter imagery has always bugged the heck out of me.

Anyway, thank you SO MUCH for all your thoughts. I seriously kept this comment in my inbox for a week or more just so I could go back and read it again. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)

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