Catch Me When I Fall, for spn_bookworm

Aug 20, 2014 08:00

Title: Catch Me When I Fall
Recipient: spn_bookwormRating: PG-13 ( Read more... )

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kalliel August 20 2014, 14:41:35 UTC
Hiking/backwoods!fic will forever be my favorite genre to ever genre, so this was an absolute pleasure! I'm so happy to have this, especially when canon doesn't often make those trips. :P (Hard to film? What?? XD) And the scenario is made all the more poignant/heart-rending when you consider what these circumstances and their attendant emotions spiral into all too soon. Even if what happens here sets them on a slightly different path than the actual S8/S9, well. You Will Always End Up here, you know?

Great work. Thank you for sharing this!

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zana_zira October 23 2014, 18:19:53 UTC

freya922 August 20 2014, 15:57:11 UTC
Oh, I love Season 8, and I especially love poor debilitated late Season 8 Sam! This was so believable - Sam insisting, puppy dog eyes on full blast, and Dean relenting...and then it all going to hell once they got out there in the mountains. I was rather relieved the Wendigo didn't show up to torment them, and quite thankful that there was phone signal and the paramedics were prompt. :) Jeez, poor Sam. You really beat him up!

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zana_zira October 23 2014, 18:21:26 UTC

madebyme_x August 21 2014, 11:19:49 UTC
You can't beat a little (or a lot!!) of h/c! I enjoyed this fic.

I liked the timeline choice, with Sam sick from the trials and how you explored the repercussions this has while on a hunt. And I liked how Sam persuaded Dean to go on a hunt - those puppy eyes really are irresistible!

Thank you for sharing :)

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zana_zira October 23 2014, 18:22:16 UTC

anactoria August 22 2014, 11:02:13 UTC
Aw, poor Sam. He really would insist on trying to help even though he's in no condition to go hunting!

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zana_zira October 23 2014, 18:23:31 UTC

spn_bookworm August 22 2014, 13:04:05 UTC
This was absolutely amazing. Thank you for writing this! ^^
Dean would totally cave under the puppy dog eyes, and Sammy being stubborn as heck every minute was just perfect. You kept them totally in character and it's definitely hard to do that. I loved it!

I was on the edge of my seat when Sam started falling over the edge towards the ravine. I may or may not have made an inhuman noise, but oh well. I adore Sammy.

Dean's worry, panic, everything was just spot on. I like how he just started ranting once Sam had awoken because s8 Dean would totally do that! :D Great job there!

The medical info sounded pretty legit. I'm impressed. I know how hard it can be to write it so I really really liked it!

I'm honestly out of words to describe how much I love this! You did everything I hoped for and more!

And I love it even more that you picked s8. :)

Thank you so much for writing this! I definitely enjoyed it. *hugs*
*scurries off to read it again*

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zana_zira October 23 2014, 18:25:20 UTC

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