Energizers, or Power Pellets - for Jeanny

Sep 11, 2013 18:56

Title: Energizers, or Power Pellets
Author: mymuseandi
Recipient: Jeanny
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Author's Notes: Thanks to my awesome beta - she knows who she is - for doing such a wonderful job even as the deadline approaches. Any mistakes are mine, and I hope Jeanny likes this as much as I have the pleasure of stretching my writer's skills with an ( Read more... )

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kalliel September 12 2013, 01:44:31 UTC
I really love your missing scene from this ep; it's one of my favorites from the season, and I'm so glad that Sam and Charlie get to have this moment here; I think on-screen, her interactions are predominantly with Dean, so it's nice to see the reverse here. I really like the way you allow Charlie to process her fear and disgust without letting her consume her--but also without glossing over the extremely traumatic, terrifying reality of what's going on around them. That levelness to her character, the preservative pragmatism, maybe, really helps Sam here, I think, and certainly it helps the reader unpack what's up with the Winchesters as Charlie does the same. Great work!

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troll_la_la September 12 2013, 10:22:47 UTC
I loved this so much, thank you for filling this prompt! I thought both of the characterizations were dead on, and Charlie's boundless enthusiasm for learning new "hunting skills" (boosting cars and picking locks) was so cute. This was just what I was missing in that episode!

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nagi_schwarz September 12 2013, 16:16:43 UTC
Loved this. Sam didn't get much screen time bonding with anyone but Dean or Amelia in season 8. This was adorable.

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cappy712 September 16 2013, 06:03:02 UTC
Just love the POV of the missing scene. Thank you for sharing.

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harrigan September 19 2013, 15:39:12 UTC
What the others have said! I ♥ Charlie, and would love to see her spend a little more time with Sam. Thanks for providing!

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