Oh Comely, for floranna

Aug 13, 2013 09:58

Title: Oh Comely
Author: coyotesuspect
Recipient: floranna
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: ~6,400
Warnings: violence against women
Author's Notes: Story diverges from canon around mid-season 3. The monster is based on two separate, but similar, pieces of French and English folklore, and I’ve taken liberties with both its name and abilities. Thank you to my recipient for the ( Read more... )

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ficwriter1966 August 13 2013, 14:49:30 UTC
This is just all kinds of gorgeous! I love Jo being smart and sassy and capable - her relationship with Dean here is beautifully real, with the two of them on a very equal footing, and I do so wish Show had seen fit to do that. Love your MoW, too.

And Jo teaming up with Henricksen??? I hope you go ahead and write that, because I would be all over it.

Thanks for this! It's really brightened up a dark, rainy morning.

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coyotesuspect September 30 2013, 23:35:31 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so glad so many of the elements worked for you. :)

I don't know if Jo&Henriksen will ever happen. *g* But it is a fun story to contemplate.

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quickreaver August 13 2013, 14:53:26 UTC
Very cool! You write a great Jo and an interesting MotW. Thank you!

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coyotesuspect September 30 2013, 23:36:00 UTC
Thank you! :D

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monicawoe August 13 2013, 15:45:38 UTC
What an intriguing read! The monster was great and man do I love the backstory you set up here with Sam - that's a tale I'd love to read too! And Victor lives! Hooray all around.

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quickreaver August 13 2013, 17:21:00 UTC
I can totally see you groovin' on Sam's backstory!

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coyotesuspect September 30 2013, 23:36:38 UTC
Hee - sometimes the funnest part of an AU is writing the weird side stories. Thank you for reading! :D

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roque_clasique August 13 2013, 17:55:28 UTC
This was fabulous. Loved it.

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coyotesuspect September 30 2013, 23:37:08 UTC
Thank you so much! ♥

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troll_la_la August 14 2013, 00:53:44 UTC
Now I need to read Jo and Henrickson stories, where am I gonna find those, huh? LOL

Seriously, this was cool, such a poignant AU for the boys!

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coyotesuspect September 30 2013, 23:37:55 UTC
LOL good point! Someone should write them; I think they'd be a great pair.

Glad you enjoyed! Thank you so much for reading and commenting. (:

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