Wrench - Team Schmoop

[storydivagirl]

Title: I Can Feel Your Heart Beat from a Thousand Miles
Author: Tommygirl/storydivagirl
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3,929
Spoilers: Through All Hell Breaks Loose Part 2
Summary: Sam wants to celebrate an important anniversary.
A/N: Still not sure where the heck this came from, but much love to iamtheenemy for her beta work. Feedback is *always* adored.

Comments

[rejeneration]

Awwwwwwwww. Yay for wrenchschmoop! Much needed after wrenchangst! -grin- This was just gorgeous. So happy Dean gets plunked down in the middle of some field buck-ass nekkid instead of, you know, the alternative! 'Cause poor, poor, poor Sammy! Devastation just wouldn't cover it.

I love the banter in this piece. It's so much fun to see them interacting back and forth. There's so much love in all of their playful exchanges and the tone was perfect for each one of 'em.

I caught a tiny typo while I was here: “I still don’t know how it happened, and I know it still freaks out you sometimes, freaks you out yes?

Heraea has been so much fun!! This was a great story to end on. 9

[storydivagirl]

Thank you, darling. I'm glad you enjoyed it. The only thing I thought when I saw "wrench" as my prompt was Sam giving it to Dean as a gift. The rest just came out of nowhere.

Fixed the typo (it seems no matter how many times I read something over and over, I always miss something).

Thanks again!

[rejeneration]

I am the _very_ same way. And the worst part is, I'll read and read and read and catch a new one every time and there's _still_ more. -grin- How does that happen??!

And yeah, I can just see Sam with his tongue in the corner of his mouth trying to decide on what to give him, and hey! A wrench has its uses! But Dean's responses... classic. Just perfect Dean! -draws hearts around fic-

[storydivagirl]

Dude, I think our brains just stop functioning and we don't see it. But it's rather annoying. Heh.

And thank you again, darling. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[gracelessone]

I liked the premise of this, but it didn't flow for me. I would've liked to have seen the past / present stuff defined a little better. the characterization was great, it's so very Dean that he would be calm when his time was up, and Sam being just... frozen afterwards was totally in character.

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[storydivagirl]

Thank you! And yeah, I think as long as Dean knows that Sam is okay, he'd be calm.

[angharadd]

I'd like some explanation as to how Dean returned (the only one I could come up with are Teh Shiny Powers of Sam's brain, but then, I'm going on too few hours of sleep, and, therefore, am sorta dumb), but I'm happy for the boys as it is. The beginning of the story had outright scared me.
Th final dialogue is just priceless. Hell, all the exchanges here are.
Thank you!

[storydivagirl]

Yeah, I feel bad for rushing through the Dean's return thing...it just was getting really long and no end in sight. I apologize for that - there will probably be a follow-up at some point. Ugh.

But I'm glad you enjoyed it, especially the banter. I like to think of their exchanges as their ways of saying "I love you" so I'm glad it worked.

Thanks for the comments!

[angharadd]

YAY! I'll be looking forward for it!

Yeah, you have such a knack for writing this strange language of the Winchesters! <3

[storydivagirl]

Well, thank you very much, darling!

[merihn]

AWW! That was awesome. And wow to Dean being given back. That was a great idea.

The wrench was thoroughly random and funny.
♥

[storydivagirl]

Seriously, when I first saw my prompt, I just imagined Sam giving it to Dean for a gift and Dean being WTF? The rest, I have no idea where that came from.

Glad you enjoyed it, darling!

[storydivagirl]

You're very welcome! Thank you for commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed it!