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Fic: Smoke and Mirrors

Nov 03, 2006 19:01

Title: Smoke and Mirrors
Author: dzturtlepower (aka earthanthem)
Word Count: 768
Rating: PG

( Instinct told him to flee, to save his own life, but that didn’t make sense to Dean, not the way a .45 in his palm or a dagger tucked against his waist made sense. )

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terraneanblues November 4 2006, 01:01:51 UTC

Thanks very much! :-D This is my first SPN fic (I've only written HP before) so I'm glad to hear you like it.

I'll try, haha.

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terraneanblues November 4 2006, 03:39:16 UTC

:-D Thanks again! It's tough getting into a new fandom, as you don't yet know what's cliche, what's a given, a taboo, etc... But SPN people are so much more forgiving and understanding than HP people ;)

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mijmeraar November 5 2006, 09:25:02 UTC

This is really quite spectacular, I love it. The feeling of Dean's erratic irrational thoughts, on realising that Sammy was in there, and that instinct of having to save him just as he had all that time ago, it is just tragic and yet beautiful. And this:

They hit clean air at a run, him and Sam, and they kept running, oxygen burning its way into their blood; running, because it was what Dad had told them to do.

broke my heart. Wonderful piece, thank you for sharing =). I'll memory and probaly rec in my journal somewhere down the track, if that's okay.

terraneanblues November 5 2006, 14:37:06 UTC

Oh, thank you so much! And no, I certainly don't mind a rec! (God, I'm all fluttery and flaily now because you are far, far too kind.)

Thanks again :)

a_phoenixdragon November 7 2006, 03:19:52 UTC

Wow.... So beautiful.... So eerie and haunting... So...Dean..

*Weeps quietly for them*

*Hugs you*

terraneanblues November 7 2006, 03:26:32 UTC

Aw, thanks! :)