Beta for Reverse Big Bang (due Dec 2)
Title: Second Chance Kid
Genre: Gen, De-aged Dean
Pairings or Characters: Dean, Sam, John, Bobby, Castiel, original angel
Type of beta: spelling, grammar, continuity errors, general feedback
Length: @13.5K
Short Summary:
Castiel rests a hand on John’s shoulder. “I cannot bring her back, but I can help you save yourself, save your sons.”
John’s head snaps up, the mention of his boys snapping him back to the present.
“What the hell are you talking about?”
The man looks past John. His face shifting from concern to surprise. “But, for now, I think that perhaps you have a more immediate problem.”
John spares a glance backward to see a four year-old Dean sitting on the floor, rocking himself and sucking his thumb.
Posting date is December 2. I'd be grateful for a second of eyes on this! Any help would greatly appreciated. Thank you in advance!!
Genre: Gen, De-aged Dean
Pairings or Characters: Dean, Sam, John, Bobby, Castiel, original angel
Type of beta: spelling, grammar, continuity errors, general feedback
Length: @13.5K
Short Summary:
Castiel rests a hand on John’s shoulder. “I cannot bring her back, but I can help you save yourself, save your sons.”
John’s head snaps up, the mention of his boys snapping him back to the present.
“What the hell are you talking about?”
The man looks past John. His face shifting from concern to surprise. “But, for now, I think that perhaps you have a more immediate problem.”
John spares a glance backward to see a four year-old Dean sitting on the floor, rocking himself and sucking his thumb.
Posting date is December 2. I'd be grateful for a second of eyes on this! Any help would greatly appreciated. Thank you in advance!!