I will survive

[spn_4eva]

Title: I will survive (from the song by Gloria Gaynor)
Characters: Sam, Dean
Word count: 3293 words
Summary: Winchesters deal with Dean's disability (MS)
Time Frame: Set immediately after Acquiesced
Disclaimer: Oh how I wish... Alas!
Rating: Gen

Comments

[si_star_x]

Okay. This was absolutely stunning. I'm really jealous of your writing right now, it's just so real and to the point and in-character. You're able to shoot images straight into my mind and I felt the pain and concern and frustrations so clearly. I loved the way you had the first section as a flashback to the past in Dean's PoV- the way he bought the brace for his foot and did manage to keep it from Sam for a while. That just tugged at my heartstrings, poor Dean.

I thought the haircut scene was brilliant, I mean, it was totally adorable that Sam wanted to cut Dean's hair ("“So? I still like my ears how they are, attached to my head”- Dean has the most adorable ears), but then when Sammy asked Dean to cut his it just melted me. I loved the uncertainty and then when Sam insisted that Dean trusts himself (because Sam is still an awesome little brother and still trusts Dean regardless) he let himself do it and it happened. That was a really clever and moving scene.

I adore your last paragraph too. I like how the focus is Sam and not on his illness... so sad but so beautiful.

Keep up the great work, I really enjoyed this chapter and the whole 'verse seems so real and heartbreaking. I think you're just about managing to encapsulate what we love about hurt!Dean and the life that follows. I'm honestly in awe and glad that you've realised your writing talent!

*Hugs tight*

[spn_4eva]

I was just about to message you to come read this! You're so fast girl! I can't tell you how happy your comment made me. I have tears in my eyes.

And now I'm squealing with happiness.

You have no idea what your opinion on this means to me. I was more scared to post this because I was afraid you might not like it as much compared to the previous one. I am so so SOOOO happy you liked it.
LOVE YOU ♥♥♥♥♥♥ and thank you for all your support ♥♥

[si_star_x]

Okay, now I have tears in my eyes and a smile on my face. You're lucky I was awake, I'm usually asleep until around ten but Paul had an interview today so I woke up early. \o/

That's really sweet that my opinion counts, always happy to spur you on and be your cheerleader.

I loved it even more, if anything! Now that we now how they work and how everybody is feeling... I adore the 'verse. It's lovely. You're awesome. The End. :D

♥♥<3<3

[spn_4eva]

=::D same here. Way to go Paul! Haha
I'm too excited to sleep now. This is the happiest I've been today. Thanks to your lovely self <3