Re: FILLED: Hear My Heart Beat So (10/10) - Jensen/Jared - NC-17 - fictrickling_sandJune 25 2011, 08:51:36 UTC
OH HUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I ABSOLUTELY ADORE THIS. EVERY SINGLE WORD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Especially the chubbypup!Jared - THAT TOTALLY MELTED ME!!!! This fic seriously had me at 'Hello' ;p!!
I also love how teenage!Jared was the one who made the first move - it was so..him! And Jensen.. oh Jen!!! And that scene inside the cabin. Oh GOD!!!! Jen's dirty talk - and then
“But I’m not going to,” he says finally. “You’re right, this tradition is fucked beyond belief. And when you’re finally the Beta of the pack, you and your Alpha might be able to change it. But if you don’t want me, then you don’t want me.” Saying that breaks Jensen a little, but he forces himself to continue. “I know what I did, maybe it wasn’t the best thing to do, but it was the right thing. I understand why it makes me unfit to mate you, but know that it was for you.”
It wasn't possible for me to love Jensen anymore than at that moment!!! It really really shows what Jared meant to him and I just.. ngh~~~~~!!!!!!!!!
Your sex scenes are HOT beyond belief - I love how playful Jared is and how easy things are between the two of them.
And the ending? OH. MY. GOD!!! moremoremorepleasepleaseplease?!?!?!
;E!!
I'm very possibly babbling incoherently but I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!! I wouldn't be opposed to the idea of it getting turned into a verse, you know ;E! Hint hint ;p! Timestamps are <33333333 too hehehe ;E!!
AND - one last thing. If all of the above doesn't make any sense, which is a very very real possibility, I should know ^^!, I just want to say..
THANK YOU FOR A FANTASTIC FILL, HUN ;)! :glomps you: <33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
I ABSOLUTELY ADORE THIS. EVERY SINGLE WORD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Especially the chubbypup!Jared - THAT TOTALLY MELTED ME!!!! This fic seriously had me at 'Hello' ;p!!
I also love how teenage!Jared was the one who made the first move - it was so..him! And Jensen.. oh Jen!!!
And that scene inside the cabin. Oh GOD!!!! Jen's dirty talk - and then
“But I’m not going to,” he says finally. “You’re right, this tradition is fucked beyond belief. And when you’re finally the Beta of the pack, you and your Alpha might be able to change it. But if you don’t want me, then you don’t want me.” Saying that breaks Jensen a little, but he forces himself to continue. “I know what I did, maybe it wasn’t the best thing to do, but it was the right thing. I understand why it makes me unfit to mate you, but know that it was for you.”
It wasn't possible for me to love Jensen anymore than at that moment!!! It really really shows what Jared meant to him and I just.. ngh~~~~~!!!!!!!!!
Your sex scenes are HOT beyond belief - I love how playful Jared is and how easy things are between the two of them.
And the ending? OH. MY. GOD!!!
moremoremorepleasepleaseplease?!?!?!
;E!!
I'm very possibly babbling incoherently but I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!! I wouldn't be opposed to the idea of it getting turned into a verse, you know ;E! Hint hint ;p! Timestamps are <33333333 too hehehe ;E!!
AND - one last thing. If all of the above doesn't make any sense, which is a very very real possibility, I should know ^^!, I just want to say..
THANK YOU FOR A FANTASTIC FILL, HUN ;)!
:glomps you:
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thank you so much for all your sweet compliments. as far as turning it into a verse/doing timestamps--dunno. we'll just have to see :)
really glad you enjoyed it ♥
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