Prompt 4 - vocoder

Sep 14, 2007 00:32

Title: Life As Expected
Pairing: Tim Kasher/Conor Oberst, Conor Oberst/Mike Mogis
Rating: R for language
Prompt: 4 - vocoder
Summary: "That was revenge for finding out about Kimberly and Tim's engagement through his brother."
Word Count: 341
Disclaimer
Notes: Part of a loosely bound bunch of vignettes. First part is here.

Life As Expected )

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_poetic_harlot_ September 14 2007, 04:56:34 UTC
Oh! I get to review the first part too, don't I? Marvelous. Clearly, I liked this very much. Given how you FORCED me to read it because you thought it was horrible.

Thus proving Frankih is slightly spazzy-brained. But spazzy-brained can work for you sometimes, because you wrote this, darling. And it is fabulous. I love how much of the impact of this is between the lines, the unspoken sections that the reader adds in. The visualization of Conor, the sound of Tim's voice. The robotic quality of it was striking.

Babble babble. I have nothing bad to say about this. Haha, other than Kelly likes happy endings? And eating glock.

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fedradiowires September 14 2007, 05:00:33 UTC
I am getting slightly less spazzy brained. See icon for further information. Both yours and mine. I am now fixating on the tape. Daaaamn you.

There isn't a happy ending for most of the vignettes. A whole bunch of neutral ones though. A couple nicer ones. A couple sad ones. Get your gun out of your mouth.

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_poetic_harlot_ September 14 2007, 05:02:14 UTC
Pssh. You have fleas. Permanent spazzy brained. Conor's sex-tape is hypnotizing. Ohhh.

Poor, poor Conor. You never want to give him joy. Just booze and scars. XP

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fedradiowires September 14 2007, 05:39:25 UTC
THAT WAS ONLY ONCE.

Well. Maybe joy occasionally.

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ovidien September 15 2007, 16:13:47 UTC
kinda really leaves me wanting more...

it's so like...i want to dive into it and pull out more because it's almost teasing in what it's offering and then it's like 'end.'

ooh, you tease.

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