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[fedradiowires]

Title: Dangerous Mix
Pairing: Tim Kasher/Conor Oberst
Rating: PG-13/R (for drug use)
Prompt: cassette
Summary: Tim swears he sees Conor around town sometimes.
Word Count: 711
Disclaimer
Notes: So dead. NaNo is eating my time (and my face) alive. I have written about 6800 words (including this) in 27 hours, so excuse any suck.

Comments

[_poetic_harlot_]

I really, really think that Conor saying that neither of them are good for the other? That line is just gut-wrenching. Oh my goodness. Since, hello, Kelly is the number one happy-ending fan for these two and it seems so desperately hopeless at the moment.

That is fabulous, though. Fabulous and fitting, because Tim seems so trapped and desolate. I love how that essence just sort of swells through the narration. I am surprised how easily you turned sympathy towards Tim, haha. Since, you know. He has been an ass in past parts. Oh, Frankih, the amazingly drained wonder of the world! <33

[fedradiowires]

Ahahaha, yes, but you get happy Conor/Tim in other places! Not necessarily this story. But. Yeah. And I am so the number one sad-with-a-message ending fan.

I like that he is still an ass in this part. It all has to do with point-of-view. All of it. I'm convinced. Also, I'm not a wonder of the world just a kid who takes a bajillion energy shots before leaving work. &hearts

[ex_thickwith812]

so, i don't really like reading about conor, ever. but i like this.

They all knew each other in those awkward teenage years.
i like that line a lot because you can only describe a certain group of people to such an extent, but that line alone explains everything, yet leaves it open for interpretation. if that makes any sense? haha

goooodjob,goodjob.

[fedradiowires]

Hahaha, thank you!

[i_amjackscolon]

beautiful. =]