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spirt119

Bit 'o Story

May 15, 2003 05:34

The house was completely dark except for the light illuminating from the television. Alex was so thrilled to be left home alone by her parents and she was celebrating by staying up late watching horror flicks. Before they left, her parents told her to be in bed; "No later than 9! Or else!" "9?" she thought "9 is too early for me. Plus they'll never ( Read more... )

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outside572 May 15 2003, 21:46:13 UTC

opens the door to a massive orgy in her front yard. I know thats unimaginitive, but I don't have enough time to be creative.

phymisty May 16 2003, 19:52:02 UTC

Upon seeing the tangled masses of bodies, Alex let out a scream of her own. In the masses seemed to be every parent from the neighborhood. She was too stunned to see where the original scream came from. That being her best friend, Susie, who had also opened her front door to see the monstrosity.

lol, have fun whomever picks it up.

outside572 May 18 2003, 10:18:27 UTC

The scene was too gruesome to watch, but for some reason they couldn't take their eyes off it. They huddled together for safety, but their embrace of security quickly turned to gropes of ecstacy. Soon, clothes were flying everywhere, and they rolled around right there in the doorway with unbridled passion until they eventually found thier way on to the yard with the rest of the group.

... spirt119 May 18 2003, 16:49:47 UTC

Just as thing were stsarting to get all hot and heavy Alex heard a loud noise. She opened her eyes only to see that this was all a dream and her horror movie had ended. She whiped the sweat from her face and walked over to the tv and turned it off and headed to bed. Maybe she should've went to bed at 9!

Re: ... outside572 May 19 2003, 12:07:10 UTC

Man, Poppy, you're such a loser ending the story like this. Heck, I wouldv'e have compiled the story into one thing so I could show all my friends, but NNOOOO!!! you had to go and make it all a dream. What a blue falcon.

Re: ... spirt119 May 22 2003, 10:41:31 UTC

You are the blue falcon! YOU! Being the one who turned what was supposed to be a 10 year old little girl into a sex toy! Are you a pedophile?

Re: ... outside572 April 21 2004, 07:06:54 UTC

I reply after nearly a year!

no age was given. in my mind, alex was a really sheltered 18 yr old.

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