[fanfiction] A Moment in Time

[spirit_ventures]

Title: A Moment in Time
FANFICTION: TVfXQ
ONE SHOT
Rating: PG
Comments: Written for the Yunchun timeline exchange at yunchun_ywh. It's been such a long time since I wrote something, let alone something like this O_o I'm definitely getting rusty... -_-;;

And just to keep track of this 'entry'... @yunchun_ywh and @hug______.

As well: [ Round 1 entries] [ Round

Comments

[foolishlovexo]

OMG, you don't know how happy I am someone posted already! I'm still working on mine. But is the deadline today? I don't remember o.O

brb, I'm gunna go read!~

[tamiko_unknown]

No worries, the deadline isn't for a while ^^ You have until April 1st, which is still a lot of time =D Hwaiting~~~

[foolishlovexo]

ah~ man I better finish it soon, since I don't have that long (I'm leaving on a trip on thursday and won't be back till the middle of April T_T)

Okay~ on to the comment!

I loved this!

It left a big impression on me, the emotion and thought put into it in what relationship the two had, had. I know it sounds evil, but I love fics where people talk about how rumors spread and people beat other people just people of the way they act around them (I hope that makes sense xD)

But I really enjoyed reading this!
Thanks for sharing!

[tamiko_unknown]

You can do it~! Looking forward to yours =D

Thank you so much for reading ^^

[kakkobean]

*squees*

♥

[tamiko_unknown]

Thank you for reading~!

♥

[bebetama]

HANDS DOWN while licking your shoes with love

You're a fucking good writter OMG

"A solid definition of their relationship is still sketchy at most now, but at least there’s plenty of time to put down the notes and play out a new melody. It’s a new page to start on, even if the future is uncertain. Even if he doesn’t know who he really is right now.

His heart is sure though, even if his mind is not."

Best way to express my feelings is in my mother tongue "simplement SUBLIME"

I want more Yunchun in my life AIGOOO

<3

[tamiko_unknown]

I'm... flattered *blush* But no bowing or kowtowing or anything of that sort please; I don't know why but it's kind of awkward for me :x

Merci beaucoup pour lire~ (excuse my almost non-existent French >_>)

♥

[bebetama]

HAHAHA your french is cute

Keep up the good work and write more Yunchun ^__^

[shinchul303]

I'm only several paragraphs in and already I'm compelled to comment. This is the way I travel, when I'm forced to. It's like you've been inside my head.

Self-serving, I know, and I've not seen you on this board before, but still unnerving.

Back to reading.

[kratynoi]

I loved this~ ♥
The story flowed so well, and the way you unraveled their connection to each other was so well written, not in one quick go, but slowly and beautifully.
They're past is so heartbreaking, but at least they have the future to build up their relationship again. ^^ ♥

[tamiko_unknown]

I'm glad you enjoyed this ^^

Thank you very much for reading~

♥