moira

[ajin]

Title: moira
Author: ajin
Pairing: Jaehyo/Kyung
Rating: PG-15
Genre: AU, Black Humour, Romance
Word Count: 1,246
Summary: Jaehyo and Kyung go on a midnight rendezvous.

Comments

[countrymir]

only jaekyung in this au would find the morgue sexy enough to get busy in. nasty little disrespectful fucks omg ALL THE POOR GRANDMAS AND GRANDPAS WITH TOO GHEIBOYS DESECRATING THEIR WAITING ROOM WITH THEIR SEXING :| sigh

omg you crazy little princess. at first i thought that they were just chilling at a gas station having a grand old time just hanging out outside, not waiting to steal bodies. it took them actually stealing the body for me to even think of anything of the sort so hell, kudos for making everythign stay ambiguous enough to apply to a body snatching scenario or just chilling handing around.

and this one was loads more romantic than the original fic. it didn't exactly give in too much but you could feel the romantic pull was loads stronger in this one than in the last (but then again, kyung was being a dick for a long while before he even let himself truly interact with creeper jaehyo).

you left a few things really vague which i enjoyed. like i didn't know a lot of things in the fic until it was told to me directly, therefore lovely~ had me eating out of the palm of your hand ad in your total control.

enjoyed the sexy talk loads... still wtfing over the morgue ;-;

characterizations; you did good keeping up with the same motif you had for the jaekyung in the first one, less bitchy since their in a sorta relationship. i'd have been all smh if he keeps with it in the same degree. ffs, you're getting your dick wet and regular ass and you keep being a dick? lol

my fave thing about the fic was just their general interaction. they play off of one another so its almost easy to see their next course of action. useless namjas who are shit without someone else. like leeches :|

[ajin]

:D

Lmao your comment makes me so happy. I wanted to keep it neutral at first.

Obviously. No bad first impression was involved after all ;p

Sexy talk lol Can you even call it that XD I can't help it. This is the proper manifestation if my true sense of humour. I'm also a creepy mofo but that you know.

Thank you bb :3