HaeHyuk [Suju] - We were more than just bleeding poetry on our sleeves

Jan 02, 2010 18:52


Stop it. Stop making this so hard for me.

I’m crying saltwater tears all over the bathroom tiles and watching my skin turn red-raw as I scrub the smell of you off me.  I’m writing repentant letters to China and stopping before the post box to dump them in the trash.

I’m trying, Donghae, but it’s not working.

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Don’t look at me like that when ( Read more... )

fandom:superjunior, pairing:haehyuk

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azyria January 2 2010, 15:19:14 UTC
Beautiful, once again. Especially this caught my eye:
But you were always there to hold me up, with orange sunshine in your hair and your smiling lips pressed against my forehead.

And this: Like Jungsu promised the 13 of us, we’re here, we’re a screaming success and we’re sprinting down the fields of the future, the sky in the small of our fist and the wind all around us.
Gorgeous imagery ♥

and yes, write some fluff too, please :D?

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spiral_empire January 2 2010, 16:06:30 UTC
FFFF thank youuuu, i always treasure your comments ♥ they make me feel wonderful!

i-i'll definitely try fluff. i'll prolly fail worse than i did with angst, but i'll definitely try :D

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mawaru_berry January 3 2010, 09:30:37 UTC
Okay, I really have to run off to go to bed, but I wanted to leave my comment first. I love this! Your writing impresses me so much-ohmygoodness, your imagery? I love it.

Fluff would be wonderful as well ^_^

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spiral_empire January 3 2010, 16:21:09 UTC
you make me feel so special, and i love you for that :') ♥

i'll definitely try fluff someday :D

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mawaru_berry January 3 2010, 16:42:01 UTC
I make you feel special? ^_^ Yay!

<3

Fluff is rewarding as well as angst, haha. I need to write more of it, too XD

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hezai January 30 2010, 11:36:05 UTC
;-------------;

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spiral_empire January 30 2010, 16:31:41 UTC
DDD:

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