[fic] A Promise Worth Keeping [8/?]

[spinshadow]

title: A Promise Worth Keeping
chapter: 8/?
genre: drama
rating: NC-17
band/pairing: Nightmare x SCREW; Ni~ya x Manabu, Byou x Kazuki, Jin x Yuuto, SCREW OT4, Hitsugi x Manabu, Ruka x Sakito
warnings: m/m contact, light BDSM
disclaimer: This is a work of fiction, completely unauthorized
summary: Manabu had made a promise to himself....
rewind: 1 2

Comments

[ruksugi]

Manabu.... We need to put you in Addicts Anon. seriously. But he is getting what he wants.

That boy is a bit of a freak.

He needs to start a healthy relationship.... Maybe Hitsu....

I wonder How Many other piercings dose Hitsugi have.

All in all it was a yummy, yummy chapter.

[yuuanashi]

Well of course the real has never said, but I can't help wondering sometimes. A crown is usually between 4 and 8 dydoes, plus that part is written vaguely enough that there could be even more. >_>

[l33t_dreams]

Manabu had actually been surprised when Yomi had excused himself after dinner, though there was still a certain light in the man's eyes when he left.
I see what you did thar. XD

How much was he allowed to touch? At least some, right?
I think I would die if I was Manabu. Bearing such a high level of sexual need and desire, but always worried he was doing too much or not enough. I coudn't handle the stress. X__X

And then posed a bit, showing off his body, running hands over his skin.
Oh, Manabu... I'll blush on your behalf.

Manabu stalled in his little turn, biting his lip against a low moan as he watched Sakito riding Ruka's cock nice and slow
Yeahhh, that would stop me in my tracks too. *____*

No wonder he calls you Maneki
Can you explain this one for me? You know so many name suffixes that I don't.

The elder guitarist's head turned sharply towards him, everything else stilled
Gulp!

Even better, there was no hesitation in Sakito's returning of his kiss, only equal hunger, equal lust.Whew. Well that's a relief

[yuuanashi]

I think I love you. XD

Maneki is short for maneki neko, the archetypal lucky cat. I'm not sure what Manabu did to get himself labelled as a lucky charm, but it works?

It's probably unwarranted speculation, but he's had the same facial piercings for ten years, I can't help it. Crown and ladder? *__*

Enjoy the image cuz I don't think anything's going to come of it? Then again, I hadn't expected ANY of this chapter's events, so.... XD

[k435y]

...Yeah, didn't expect that from Ruka and Sakito. XD
Manabu...makes me speechless, really. >____<;;