AtLA: And History Forgot About Us

Dec 16, 2007 18:28

Title: And History Forgot About Us
Fandom: Avatar the Last Airbender
Author: kawaiispinel
Feedback: ...Is loverly.
Word Count: 651
Rating: G
Characters: Sokka, Toph
Summary: History may have forgotten about them, but they're okay with it.
Disclaimer: It's still not mine. Really.
Author's Note: Written for the avatar_contest prompt "History." I think ( Read more... )

fandom:avatar the last airbender

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darkjediprinces December 17 2007, 05:21:52 UTC
ROFLMFAO.

"Sokka, are you stroking your beard again?"

"...No?"

Priceless XD

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kawaiispinel December 17 2007, 05:27:54 UTC
XD Because when Sokka hits thirty, he will have a beard. And he will stroke it. And he will only think Toph doesn't realize he's doing it. *nods*

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chibirenamon December 17 2007, 12:32:06 UTC
Nyahahahaha... XD

Excellent job at imagining how the tale would be mutilated in the history books, and an even better job at writing Toph and Sokka (I love Toph's dry humor and Sokka's tiptoeing between wisdom and comedy in the series, and you managed to achieve both here, too)!

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kawaiispinel December 17 2007, 22:06:13 UTC
XD Thanks!

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meteor_wish December 17 2007, 15:24:42 UTC
I love this! The characterization is spot on! Very, very nice. :)

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kawaiispinel December 17 2007, 22:07:13 UTC
Hee! Thank you! ^_^

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arthoniel December 18 2007, 23:36:18 UTC
You would enter this contest, wouldn't you? You have an awesome fic here and I don't even have an idea for this prompt yet and now I barely have a chance. This is NOT cool... in the best way possible. XD

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kawaiispinel December 19 2007, 01:33:13 UTC
LOL Thanks... And sorry? XD

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rosehiptea December 21 2007, 14:37:56 UTC
That is brilliant, and so, so true. I love the characterization and just the whole idea. This line especially cracked me up:

the kid playing Aang was nothing more than some snot-nosed brat with an arrow pasted on his head, threatening to beat all the other kids in the play up with his staff and wailing backstage about how the play could have been so much better if the Avatar had gotten to fight a dragon.

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kawaiispinel December 21 2007, 17:17:53 UTC
XD Thanks so much! ^__^

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