The Essentials

[mawaru_berry]

Focus/Pairing: Heechul-centric, Leeteuk/Heechul, other pairings
Rating: PG-13
Summary: With Heechul there, Jungsu had a chance.
Word count: 5,144

A/N: I just want to say that I love this AU, and will probably be using it more often to tell other people's stories. After reading this, you might find it necessary (when relevant to your interests). I'd

Comments

[catskilt]

a;fdslk;fjk how long have I taken to get back to this? But I have finally finished reading it! And oh Kai. Oh. D:

BUT before I get to choking you for making my heart ache, I really like the whole premise of this AU, the idea of emotionally or mentally broken people in a hospital together with all their peculiarities, and Heechul and Teuk in the middle of it all, wading through the problems and the patients and finding solace in each other. The different illnesses that you gave them, the companionship between Teuk and Heechul and the hints about Teuk's past and the rising feelings in Heechul for him. How Teuk keeps trying to fix other people but not able to fix himself. And then the end....nurrghhh but I don't know what to say except that I gasped a little when Teuk was gone and I was totally aching when Heechul told Kyu "you were wrong".

Your writing is so lovely, bb ♥ sometimes I can't get how you're so young because it really, really doesn't reflect in your writing. You write better than most people I know of my own age, and even people older. There's always this sort of fantasy feeling about it, and yet it's real, and it's so compelling and just well-written. Never stop writing :)

[mawaru_berry]

no worries :) & your icon is so appropriate for this fic ;~;

hnnng I love your comments, Gem. I do tend to worry about my writing because I am young compared to most of the bnfs/good fic writers in general and I often think of myself as inexperienced. but hearing this from you is really comforting ♥ thank you so much, bb, and I hope you never stop writing, either.