What a Tangled Web...

Sep 10, 2008 15:15


Title: What a Tangled Web
Pairing: YeWook, KiMin (I guess that's what it would be)...
Rating: PG? 
Summary: So this chapter is set in Sungmin's pov. This fic will soon be how each member of the band gets in the band. Some will be obvious, others will be more...surprising...I just always wanted to do a complicated interwoven story like this. So I hope ( Read more... )

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dark_hunterjenn September 11 2008, 00:31:13 UTC
Yay, you got it up! Sungmin is all kinds of sad/sweet in here, and blushing KiBum is uber cute. Can't wait to see whats next......

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spikesvampbaby September 11 2008, 00:35:57 UTC
aww you commented so fast! XD
I love you! haha

I'm so glad you liked it, I hope I did Sungmin justice. =D

You like how I just eased Eunhyuk in there...hehe. My epikly awsome chapter is coming up next (hint: butterfly hehe)

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renichifreak September 11 2008, 03:06:32 UTC
HYUUUUUUUUUUKKIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!

I now officially love you!!! Especially with the next chapter!!

...sorry...I'm kinda in love with Eunhyuk, so...::blush::

Poor Sungmin...I'm glad he's following his dreams, and I hope that his parents wisen up and accept his dream...

Kibum was so cute in here!!! hehe

I love how Ryeo is STILL jealous of anyone that goes anywhere NEAR Yesung...>0< SOCUTE!!!!!

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spikesvampbaby September 11 2008, 16:49:18 UTC
hehe, yay!! I'm so glad you liked the chapter. Oh i love Hyukkie too, and I think you'll like my ideas for the next chapter, cause it's got....well...ok I can't give anything away DRAT lol. But yea you should like the next chapter XD

Sungminnie, there seemed to be a little understanding there with his mom, at least she was upset he was leaving, and his father...well he'll probably show up later.

I had to make him a cutie pie, it's how I see him. With the glasses and a book in his hand. XD A big nerd hehe.

I hope I haven't portrayed Ryeo like a jerk, it's just that he seems to be a jealous type with anyone that's his, ya know? YeWook is always so cute tho XD

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renichifreak September 11 2008, 21:29:51 UTC
...It's got...what?!?!?!?!

eunhae?! Me marrying him?!?! If it's about Eunhyuk, I'll love it!!

true, his mom did seem upset...I hope that ends up well

I see the same thing...then I see him all hot...

He isn't a jerk at all!! Just really possessive...you know what I mean. If you think he seems too jerkish, fix him, or even say that he has a past lover stolen or something... I personally think it's fine!!

And I agree that yewook is precious, though a REALLY hot pairing(my #2, actually) is yehyuk. hehe #1 is eunhae,, obviously...!!

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spikesvampbaby September 12 2008, 02:23:12 UTC
Ok so it's EunHae of course, lol. OTP of course XD
hehe.

Yes yes, I could see Yehyuk. HOT
lol

Another hot pairing--HanChul. OMG so hot XD

I would make you marry him, but then it would be like this random thing in the fic. People would be like 'omg where did this come from?' lol.

Hmm, I think I like Ryeowook like this. I think it fits him. I'll make him a little less harsh tho..

And yes, my vision of Kibummie is the dork, but i find really smart people really really HOT. haha. So Kibum is just...sex on legs to me haha. (but *chants* Heechul is my favorite lol)

I hope my next chapter makes you squeal happily XD

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anonymous September 11 2008, 08:25:43 UTC
HANCHUL please <3 :(

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spikesvampbaby September 11 2008, 16:46:25 UTC
I haven't gotten there yet, give me time. But there will be HanChul XD

Thanks for reading <3

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korichan October 9 2008, 07:33:45 UTC
Gah~~ How did I miss that you were updating this, especially after I liked the first one. TT-TT

I love showing SungMin's past, and RyeoWook being so possessive. ^-^ I've never read anything hinting or having a MinBum pairing, so I'm really interested in seeing how the rest plays out.

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spikesvampbaby October 9 2008, 13:12:19 UTC
teehee it's alright I will forgive you..this time =)
At least you found and commented it. hehe.
Thank you! I dunno, I just though KiMin would be adorkable. And it fit what I wanted to do. Because...KyuMin wouldn't have worked...XD

Ah Ryeowook is love <3

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g_myzo November 13 2008, 21:20:51 UTC
haha jealous!ryeowook, so cute. lol, yewook scrambling to do homework XDD
wow, just met the guy and moving into his place the next day. Still, KiMin!! :D

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spikesvampbaby November 14 2008, 14:20:52 UTC
aww thanks so much! KiMin is my new obsession lol

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