The Six Word Challenge

Jan 10, 2025 03:03

Clarify ( Read more... )

grimm, six words

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dancingpony January 10 2025, 11:07:56 UTC
I could have used a few more words…

Napoleon stirred his cup of coffee, straightened his inbox, moved his desk calendar an inch to the left, and sharpened three pencils.

His partner wasn’t deceived by the delaying tactics. “Mr Waverly expects our report by five, and he isn’t known for granting extensions.”

“I need to clarify the details in my mind before committing them to paper,” Napoleon said loftily.

“There’s no wording that will obfuscate the detail that the raid was an abysmal failure.”

“That’s not the part I’m working on.”

Illya snorted. “Not even you can make your unplanned swim in an odoriferous duck pond sound dashing.”

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nakeisha January 10 2025, 11:13:13 UTC
*Laughs* Oh, I like it - I hadn't expected that last line. And Illya is quite right.

Very well done.

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dancingpony January 10 2025, 13:41:26 UTC
Thanks. Getting dirty (and wet and smelly) isn’t someone’s favorite part of the job.

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spikesgirl58 January 10 2025, 12:10:08 UTC

True. One does want to choose their words carefully when explaining such things. Good job!

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dancingpony January 10 2025, 13:43:17 UTC
Thank you. And I think IK’s right on this one. Duck ponds tend to smell less than pleasant. 🙂

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casey28 January 10 2025, 16:48:15 UTC

Nothing dashing about his unplanned swim, lol. Good use of the words.

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dancingpony January 10 2025, 20:42:50 UTC
Thank you!

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duckys_lady January 10 2025, 22:07:17 UTC
Love the last line! Great story.

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dancingpony January 11 2025, 02:10:15 UTC
Thank you!

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