The Six Word Challenge

[spikesgirl58]

Thrive

Comments

[nakeisha]

Here's mine. I'm not that happy with my use of 'vagabond' but needs must *g*

"I need a couple of hours off," Crocker paused, before saying, "to go to a funeral."

Kojak looked up. "Whose?"

"Remember that vagabond we found outside the cemetery? The one who'd been buried in his underwear, up to his neck in quicksand?"

"Yeah."

Crocker sighed. "He was an old army buddy of mine. He stayed on after I finished my National Service. He reckoned he'd thrive in the army and didn't want to join his dad's cement company. We'd lost touch."

Kojak stared at his youngest and favorite detective. "Want me to come with you?"

"But you didn't - Yes, please."

[dancingpony]

Actually, I think “vagabond” fits quite well in this scene. Good job.

[nakeisha]

Oh, that's good to hear. I'm glad you think it fit for this scene.

Thank you.

[spikesgirl58]

I think it worked fine! You did a fine job!

[nakeisha]

Thank you; I'm glad you think it did. Thanks.

[duckys_lady]

All the words seem to fit nicely - well done!

[nakeisha]

Thank you, very much. I'm glad you think that.