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[spiffygloves]

How's my driving? Lazard is a bit of a subjective character, but please, if I am obviously Doing It Wrong, please, please, please say something. Is he being too altruistic? Is he being too manipulative? Am I using the wrong vocabulary and slang in his dialogue?

Whatever your ish with Lazard's characterization, please post it here in a constructive crit. Comments are screened, anon is enabled. Thanks for helping me play a better Lazard ♥