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In My Time of Dying (Part 4)

Mar 04, 2007 17:27

Title: In My Time of Dying (Part 4 of 7)
Fandom: Heroes
Author: Meli Parker
Word Count: 2539
Rating: R
Characters and Pairing: Nathan/Peter
Warnings: Language, angst, slash
Spoilers: Up to 17
Summary: 2009: Nathan stands alone in his office when he gets a visitor.
Notes: I changed the length to 7 parts. I might even change it to 8. The rest of the story ( Read more... )

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meli_64 March 5 2007, 03:39:12 UTC

Oh yeah. That next gets even darker I think.

I know...I'm almost too into evil!Peter. And it's funny cause in the beginning of the show I never thought he would. I read this one evil!Peter fic and went like, "Yeah right." And then Sylar showed up and Peter got angry at Nathan and yelled at Claire at Homecoming and I got this insane idea in my head that Sylar was Peter from the future and Peter was going to go evil. ;) Course he isn't Sylar from the future, but he did go a bit evil in Isaac's loft.

I promise after this fic I'll write a happy Peter fic. One where he's not evil at all! ;D

lostandalone22 March 5 2007, 12:08:26 UTC

Nathan missed him deep down, but he also knew that he couldn’t save him.
What a way to start the fic off. It really made me feel how desperate Nathan was.

I felt so sorry for how dark Peter ended up being. He has truly become Syler.

Love how you had a scar grow back, and the only the one that conveyed Peter's guilt about what he was doing to Nathan.

Love how Nathan's still trying to help Peter, even though he doesn't want it.

Very nice chapter, and I can't wait to see the next one.

meli_64 March 5 2007, 15:21:29 UTC

Aww thanks. I love how you feel sorry for Nathan and Peter. Can't you just see Peter doing something like this and Nathan being convensed that he can help him even as Peter is like killing people. :)

The next one I would say is the darkest (it's going to blow your mind!), but the one after that I threw a couple jokes in cause I was like, whoa, too dark. Let's lighten it up for at least a moment.

lostandalone22 March 5 2007, 19:58:27 UTC

I can so picture that.

Yay! I love dark!fics, and this one's really good, so I can't wait to see what you have planned.

meli_64 March 6 2007, 01:25:30 UTC

It's up now! And really dark so I hope you like it! :)

eowyn_girl March 10 2007, 05:47:59 UTC

So much love! I think I must be extraordinarily shallow, b/c the first thing that popped into my head was Noooo, not the hair! It can't be dirty and straggly, it has to be Peter's Perfect Hair of Emoness.

The second: you succeeded in almost turning me against evil!Pete for a while and sympathising with Nathan. Nice flip, seeing as it's usually Peter on the end of a Nathan smackdown. Also reeling from the change in Peter, the coldness, Sylarness. Hey, he's been Sylarised!

I keep on waiting for Claire to make an entrance to make it all okay. (But that's only b/c I'm a Paire shipper I think.)

meli_64 March 10 2007, 07:59:25 UTC

LOL! Well, there are obviously reasons he let it get that way. (And your icon makes me sad...the hair never had a chance to live or let me run my hands through it...)

LOL! I got a Peter!Lover to start sympathizing with Nate? Yes! (And has he really been Sylarised?)

Lol, Claire's there. :D