Life on Heroes: Part 6-He Wants the Young American

[meli_64]

Title: Life On Heroes: Part 6-He wants the Young American
Fandom: Heroes/Life On Mars
Author: Meli Parker
Word Count: 1537
Rating: PG-13
Characters and Pairing: Sam, Peter, Gene Annie, Mr Petrelli
Warnings: Some Language, Mind Trippy Action
Spoilers: All episodes of both shows
Summary: The interrogation of Mr Petrelli doesn't go very well. Time

Comments

[nnwest]

Just read straight through from the start. I like the story! Two of my favourite shows right now.

Noticed a nit in this chapter, though. Petrelli looked at him in a dark manor... I think you meant ...dark manner... Manor is a house or estate. ;)

Hope there's more soon!

[meli_64]

Thanks! :D

Like I said, I changed stuff and of course I would make a mistake like that. :D

I'm working on it right now. I have like the next 5 parts pretty much done. :D

[rayosunny]

Ooh, it's sweet that Annie pulled Peter back, but I wanted to see if he was going to fly or not. Ahh.

Anyways, I'm loving this...I can't wait to read more! ;)

[meli_64]

Don't worry, Petrelli will fly at some point. :D

Thanks! Hopefully I'll post a new part soon. :)