[fanfiction] [heart no kuni no alice] Pandora's Box

[spicy_diamond]

Title: Pandora's Box
Author: spicy_diamond
Fandom: Heart no Kuni no Alice
Pairing: Peter / Alice
Rating: PG-13
Challenge: Darkfox360's HnKnA Contest: Mythology over @ ff.net
Summary: Of all mankind's emotions, there are none so dangerous nor so rewarding as hope.
Words: 1052
Author's Notes: Mythology right? This sort of thing should be right up my alley. And I had

Comments

[jinma_chan]

Yes!

FTW!

[spicy_diamond]

Thanks~ ^.^

Not entirely sure if I'm happy with it myself. But it works as back up if I can't get my other idea up and running by Saturday...

[harroe]

I like how Peter seems to think he's incapable of harming Alice through any thought he might have. He's not even lying. He really believes it! Lol

I'd laugh if Nightmare is tricking not only Alice, but Peter with that bottle too.

[spicy_diamond]

Thanks~

Seems to me it takes so much fuss for Alice to fill the bottle in the first place and she has a pretty dramatic reaction to drinking it. It would sorta make sense if she was drinking someone else's 'Heart' to throw her own out of wack. Peter leaves her pretty quick to flounder too, you have to wonder just how he expects her to be automatically drawn to him above all others... and if he thinks the magic bottle will make it so... *shrugs*

[harroe]

I never understood why Peter just left Alice by herself in the first place. It's probably because it's an otome game, so she needs to be away from him long enough to make other relationships. But plotwise, it was kind of unbelievable. He loves her so much(and we all know how unhealthy his "love" is) that he dumps her off at the Clock Tower. The reasoning just isn't clicking into place. With how obsessive he is, the only explanation I can think of is that it is a plot device. And I don't buy that he's okay as long as she's in Wonderland.

[spicy_diamond]

Yeeeah, particularly the manga, he just up and left. At least in the game Julius sorta runs him off. But you'd still figure now that he finally has Alice in his clutches Peter would be sticking to her like a leech. Plot device, most definitely. (And I do think somewhere along the line he admits that he was lying when he said he'd be okay if she was with someone else. But, as it's otome he's not allowed to go around killing her beaus and locking her in his room so only he can love her.)

[starwefter]

After so much fluff, this one was distinctly heavy and dark. And I loved it!

[spicy_diamond]

XD Thanks~ I had fun writing it~ The White Rabbit for this Wonderland take just has such an unhealthy obsession with Alice. He's an interesting character to play with.