I hope you know how amazing I thought this was!? :D Dean was just awesome. I loved how concerned he was when he was dropping Sam at the camp. And the boys talking in the car. I really enjoyed your Dean. I really loved the creepiness of Yellow eyes on the trail and at the mess hall and the whisperings while Sam was trying to sleep. And his voice slithering up Sam's spine, gave me little chills. I love too how you amped it up when Jason came to check on Sam with yellow eyes repeating what Jason said but with a much nastier meaning.... Wonderfully tense I love that. Oooh! I love the new ending! That's way better, it really added a lot and gave this a more finished feeling. I loved Dean brushing the hair from Sam's face and the” No, Sam. They don't”. That part just felt so sad and hard for Dean to see his brother like this.
Thank you so much for such a wonderful story! And for stepping in and quickly writing this in your already crazy schedule. It was such a blast working on this with you....or actually I just pretty much sat around and read while you did all the work.! LOL so, even better. :D
I'm glad you like the story, that makes me warm and fuzzy inside :D I like the new add-on ending too, I think it makes it better. Plus I edited out a bunch of unneeded stuff and tried to make it more concise. Dean always looks after Sam, that's his #1 priority. I usually write hurt!Dean, so writing a story about Sam was a bit different for me. I like how it came out though :)
Dean was just awesome. I loved how concerned he was when he was dropping Sam at the camp. And the boys talking in the car. I really enjoyed your Dean.
I really loved the creepiness of Yellow eyes on the trail and at the mess hall and the whisperings while Sam was trying to sleep. And his voice slithering up Sam's spine, gave me little chills.
I love too how you amped it up when Jason came to check on Sam with yellow eyes repeating what Jason said but with a much nastier meaning.... Wonderfully tense I love that.
Oooh! I love the new ending! That's way better, it really added a lot and gave this a more finished feeling.
I loved Dean brushing the hair from Sam's face and the” No, Sam. They don't”. That part just felt so sad and hard for Dean to see his brother like this.
Thank you so much for such a wonderful story! And for stepping in and quickly writing this in your already crazy schedule.
It was such a blast working on this with you....or actually I just pretty much sat around and read while you did all the work.! LOL so, even better. :D
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I like the new add-on ending too, I think it makes it better. Plus I edited out a bunch of unneeded stuff and tried to make it more concise.
Dean always looks after Sam, that's his #1 priority. I usually write hurt!Dean, so writing a story about Sam was a bit different for me. I like how it came out though :)
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