Comments | spiceblueeyes: No Good Deed

spiceblueeyes

No Good Deed

Nov 05, 2009 23:17

Merlin couldn’t see the sunrise from his luxury accommodations in the castle, also known as the dungeon. The only reason he knew that it was morning was because five guards showed up to escort him to the courtyard, where his sentence would be carried out.

Death.

Five guards was too many for a scrawny country ( Read more... )

merlin/arthur, merlin

Comments 22

tetsubinatu November 6 2009, 05:00:47 UTC

Nooooooooooooooooo!

Although, at least Arthur tried.

spiceblueeyes November 6 2009, 05:21:09 UTC

To bad Merlin didn't know he tried :(

dk323 November 6 2009, 05:10:41 UTC

Oh, poor Arthur. I'm glad at least he tried - so sad he couldn't do much. :(

spiceblueeyes November 6 2009, 05:22:39 UTC

*hugs him*

et_cetera55 November 6 2009, 07:49:47 UTC

*sniffle* That was beautifully written and so sad.

spiceblueeyes November 6 2009, 15:35:03 UTC

Thank you very much!

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spiceblueeyes November 6 2009, 15:36:30 UTC

*hands tissue* Thank you for reading it, even though happy endings are, well, happier :)

berttheclam November 6 2009, 10:57:59 UTC

This is a gorgeous fic. I loved the format and how you constructed it. It was so sad that arthur had tried but merlin never knew. The only bit that confused me was this, "Gwen waved at him, and then pressed her and to the window" is that meant to be hand? Thank you for this absolutely touching fic I loved it!

spiceblueeyes November 6 2009, 15:24:09 UTC

Yes, that's supposed to be hand *face palm*
Fixed now, Thank you for your comment!