Untitled, for Jenna

[irishphoenix711]

Title: Untitled
Recipient: Jenna, GringottsVault711, irishphoenix711 *cough*
Request: The main thing: I want something hot. // I don't necessarily mean smutty [though, I wouldn't object]. But I want it to be heated -- represented in the physical setting and in the emotion. Maybe something Angry and Passionate. // And, if it's doable, I don't want too much plot. I

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[fantasium]

O.O

O.O

O.O

Okay - real review will come at some point... for now, I just... I just... WOW DELANEY! I knew from the delicious excerpts that I was expecting something excellent, but this... this is just... OMGIT'SREALTIRAMISUANDILOVEIT!!!

*upgrades Delaney from Ship's Cat's Sister to Ship's Genius*

*bows to the Genius* :D

[irishphoenix711]

Delaney. Do you know how many times I died when I saw you had written this? 47. Yes, that's right. 47 times. *grins*

Alright, what should I hit first? Maybe the fact that you wrote Harry at the store, *giggles insanely* That was love. I love you.

Okay, then She wanted him so acutely, it was almost as if her desire was a tangible companion, urging her forward through the cold. OMG, you are insane genius. Mian says "Meow".

how easily they connected, like pieces of a puzzle no one but the two of them could solve. Annnnd, at this point I'm already whimpering with pure enjoyment.

In her heart, though, she knew the truth in her hope, and she didn’t like it at all. I loved that because... that is Siobhan through and through. I don't know whether to just love love love you or feel a little proud that someone's writing my character "in character". And so accurately and amazingly and, *shuts up and love love loves Delaney

[aquapristine]

*huggles Delaney*

I think Jenna really quite summarized how perfect this story is in the post above. I am impressed how wonderfully you keep Lucius' and Siobhan's characters in character and how easily the words flow. It was like another chapter of Sins.

It's so very lovely, dearest! Heh, and you made Jenna squee. :D

[somberballad]

*gasps and dies*

You are amazing, and so brave, and amazing and talented, and amazing and....

OMG it is TIRAMISU!!! I am almost crying with happiness and i am totally dead serious...*exhales elation*

You are a freaking genius...I am just speechless, wow!

Did i mention you are amazing?

[tainted_sanity]

OOOO.OOOO

Okay so... I'm pretty sure you filled that 'hot' requirement.

*wriggles in chair*

Oh man, Delaney. THat was quite excellent. Thank you very much.

*breathes long and hard*

*forgives Delaney for the Harry/Siobhan incident*