A Song for Johnny

[irishphoenix711]

Title: A Song for Johnny
Recipient: Patrick, TheVanishingAct, onbroadway_36
Request: The time period should be set in the twenties. I want a Muggle female entertainer to catch the eye of a wizard, and he snoops into the lounge she performs at to get a glimpse of her. And I want period setting... Please have them kiss, and have the Muggle entertainer singing

Comments

[on_broadway36]

Okay, dearest, first off:

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.

Secondly:

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.

And, thirdly:

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.

Ahem. I want to badly button-mash right now, but I don't think that'd be wise. >.> I might kill my keys.

“My name is John Weasley,” he whispered.

“I know,” she breathed at his neck, “but you always looked like a Johnny to me.”

OMG. That was like... SO PERFECT. Just perfect. You are perfect. This is perfect. You made an actual singer... and... I... OMG. I am just so happy right now.

Trelawny! *dies* That was hysterical. And the reaction of "Between the Sheets" and just Mrs Weasley's reaction to everything. And... everything. OMG SQUEE.

And Anna, I know you said you're glad I liked it... but... Anna, I didn't like it. I loved it. *HUGGLES*

[fantasium]

*re-reads comment*

*giggles*

*is delighted*

So... have I got your approval to post it on MNFF? And do you think I should?

*huggles*

[somberballad]

*smiles at the beautiful story*

*grins wildly at Pat's reaction*

I can think of no one better to write that story for Pat my dear Anna. It was so wonderful, I really loved the twenties setting and Elsie Carlisle...that was so very clever of you to look it up. And then the tie-in to canon. You really are quite clever Anna. I cannot wait to really review this story when it gets posted...as I am quite sure Patrick will allow.

*smiles* Well done dear :)

[hmd67]

Just so you know I'm Harald/Purplemage

I lOOOOOVED this story! Anna, it is sooo cool. Great characterizations and setting, evrything was really nice. I love Elsie she was a great character, she and John are a really cute couple.

Oh Johny!

[stellarlyssa]

I thought if I waited to comment until morning, I would be a little more coherent, but alas, I am tired still.

Therefore, I will just squee a little! Nothing compared to Patrick, but that hardly matters!

I adore the atmosphere you created, it was just perfect. I loved your descriptions of the clothes and the club. I loved the last line. I loved Agatha. I love that Elsie is a real person. I pretty much love it all. Just like I love you, dear.

[tainted_sanity]

Anna, you're a flippin' genious! I enjoyed that so incredibly much! I want mooooooooooooooooooooore! These characters were just so likeable. Anna, I command you to write more :D

That made me happy.