Challenge #6 Entry - Burn the Land, Boil the Sea

Jan 16, 2006 19:19

Title: Burn the Land, Boil the Sea
Author: Aubrey
Feedback: Is shiny. Send it to warmageaubrey0@aol.com, or comment here.
Pairing: None central to the story, but there’s bits of Roger/April
Word Count: 2241
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Action/Science fiction/Western
Summary: The captain of a Firefly-class transport comes to make a stand with a group of old ( Read more... )

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thinkofaname January 17 2006, 11:39:30 UTC
I really enjoyed that- you did the integration perfectly :) very well written.

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1407graymalkin January 17 2006, 11:42:39 UTC
Ouch my mind.

It's even crueller that the last line is so good and that the whole fic works...

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trekkiepirate January 17 2006, 22:52:55 UTC
I. Love. You.

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scrawnyjew January 18 2006, 02:27:56 UTC
*because I felt like using this journal, randomly*

Bao bei, that was AWESOME.

In other news...

“How many times do I have to save your ass, Cap’n?”

Hm... something seems off... oh, yeah, um, hon? I think Zoe would've said "How many times do I have to save your ass, Sir?", but other than that... perfect. I <3 Mark'n'Kaylee...

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toofarfromgrace January 18 2006, 02:49:54 UTC
Yeah, Zoe was the one I really wasn't sure about... I don't quite get her yet. And you're right, that sounds better. *Nods* I'll change that later.

*Chuckles* And yes. Mark and Kaylee are just... the two of them would get along so well. And they're cute. Don't let me find other excuses to stick them together just because I can.

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lp_drumline7 March 5 2006, 17:27:17 UTC
Alright - I know this is from, like, ten million years ago, but I just had to comment. I was looking back for an idea in older challenges, and you just combined two of my favorite things ever. For this ... I love you xD.

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toofarfromgrace March 5 2006, 18:02:54 UTC
*Giggles* Thank you. I know it is incredibly loserly, but RENT and Serenity/Firefly are both awesome - what's better than the two of them together?

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lp_drumline7 March 5 2006, 19:35:13 UTC
They're both crack - it's incredible xD Crazy addictions. And the two of them together is fricking love. I can picture Maureen saying 'shiny' for some reason, haha, and I am now a random shipper of Mark/Kaylee >>; Which is weird. Because I'm normally dead on Mark/Roger or Kaylee/Simon. Bah. There's room for more in my sky.

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toofarfromgrace March 5 2006, 21:59:27 UTC
Mmm, yes. Mark/Kaylee is a fun ship which never occurred to me before I wrote this, but it could definitely work. And excuse me while I go convince myself that no, I am not going to write random crossovers just to play with things like that...

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