So I've posted a few notes here
All of these, even if they offend, please don't take them as something against you. What I am after is some critiquing of my skills. You are more than welcome to say your peace, don't worry. But chances are, I will probably continue writing whatever is that I do write about and will continue to be offensive at times. It really isn't anything against you and I apologize in advance. I enjoy all your own little idiosyncrasies and values. These just happen to be mine and to maintain some respect between all of us, please respect my opinions as well. You are very much welcome to be vulgar and whatnot in your own little posts, but please in any comments, keep it civil at the very least.
Also, to critique any of this, you guys are more than welcome to tell me exactly where anything needs to be improved in writing style, or as a whole, or find the grammatical errors as well. I don't proof read a lot. And tell me what worked for you guys and what didn't (opinions of the writing itself, and not of the topic-we all know there will be something not working there for everyone). I'd really appreciate that if any of you could do that. So, so long and thanks for all the fish.
Also, to critique any of this, you guys are more than welcome to tell me exactly where anything needs to be improved in writing style, or as a whole, or find the grammatical errors as well. I don't proof read a lot. And tell me what worked for you guys and what didn't (opinions of the writing itself, and not of the topic-we all know there will be something not working there for everyone). I'd really appreciate that if any of you could do that. So, so long and thanks for all the fish.