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kayliemalinza in sparrington

Fic: Unfair Tactical Advantage

Jun 12, 2007 00:19

A little something I'd forgotten about, rescued from the abandoned pages of my notebook and finally typed up.

Title: Unfair Tactical Advantage
Author: KaylieMalinza
Rating: PG-13 for Jack's helpless lecherous observations
Word Count: 791
Setting: The Black Pearl, after the Pirates III That Should Have Been-Jack is back on the Pearl, James is with him, and the ( Read more... )

Comments 58

bella_reeve June 12 2007, 04:33:13 UTC

Mmmm Very nice. I liked it but I'm wonder why exactly Lizzie was thrown overboard? Not that I don't looove the idea. Anything that annoys Lizzie ^^

kayliemalinza June 12 2007, 05:17:08 UTC

Hmm, that is curious. ::ruminates:: Perhaps there shall be a prequel.... ^_~

astro599 June 12 2007, 04:37:05 UTC

Have I permission, then, Captain, to beat you with an oar?

Hahaha! James is funny when he's being a snipy bastard. And only Jack would be so obtuse about throwing Elizabeth overboard. Excellent!

More please?

kayliemalinza June 12 2007, 05:22:43 UTC

I don't know about doing more of this particular ficlet. It's weird, because I started writing this for the sole purpose of giving order_of_chaos some hardcore smut because she was so appreciative of the fade-to-black in Up Against the Wall, and there's no smut! ::shakes head:: I don't know if that's ironic or just sad. :/

Thanks for commenting, though!

astro599 June 13 2007, 04:18:00 UTC

Well, there is a kind of smut. Jack does stick his hand down his pants...

But I like hard-core smut too. :)

coldryuuza June 12 2007, 05:56:00 UTC

lol. i always love ur fics. they're the right amount of snark, amusement, and perversion. lol.

kayliemalinza June 12 2007, 06:05:14 UTC

Thanks so much! Glad I can consistently please you. ^_^

lostwiginity June 12 2007, 06:19:22 UTC

I like the "treasure belly" wordplay. ^^

And the fact you wrote "glare of death" and not "death glare".

lostwiginity June 12 2007, 13:02:55 UTC

P.S.: [...] and stuck his hand inside his pants.
What on earth are they doing there? O.o

kayliemalinza June 12 2007, 17:23:24 UTC

Well, I try, darling. ^_^

[...] and stuck his hand inside his pants.
What on earth are they doing there? O.o
I could tell you, but then I'd have to rate this comment R. ^.~

pixie_pan June 12 2007, 08:28:27 UTC

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!

PERFECT! ^_^

Lovelovelvoe!

kayliemalinza June 12 2007, 13:19:49 UTC

Thanks!