*laugheS* just read the other comment ... I agree 100% *kinky grin*
Anyhow ... did I mention Will annoyes me? But heck, now he's finally out of the room and the door is locked you END it *glares* Bad fangirl, go to Jacks room! *covers mouth* did I just say that O_O I meant ... the brig, .. yeah, that's what I meant ... because, you see ... Jack's room is my room, ours you see ... I mean .. *points to icon*
Anyhooo .... eventhough there wasn't really much "Jack" in this chap, the little bit we saw was fitting 100% :)
Ha ha ha! I laughed so hard at that. It's so like Jack to throw in a comment here and there, even though he's in such bad shape. And I had to love his disapointment in the water and wishing he had some more rum.
I really am liking this so far. Excellent work. ^_^
Even hovering at death's door... he's still Jack. Love how you throw in his little faces (Water... bleah!)
And Lizzie is starting to catch on... Will's just not as hot as Jack. A nice boy, I'm sure, cute in his way, noble, blah blah blah... but just not Jack.
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I have to admit, I always love it when Elizabeth sees Jack's scars in a fic, and yours is just tooo good. :)
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Anyhow ... did I mention Will annoyes me? But heck, now he's finally out of the room and the door is locked you END it *glares* Bad fangirl, go to Jacks room! *covers mouth* did I just say that O_O I meant ... the brig, .. yeah, that's what I meant ... because, you see ... Jack's room is my room, ours you see ... I mean .. *points to icon*
Anyhooo .... eventhough there wasn't really much "Jack" in this chap, the little bit we saw was fitting 100% :)
MORE! *demands*
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Ha ha ha! I laughed so hard at that. It's so like Jack to throw in a comment here and there, even though he's in such bad shape. And I had to love his disapointment in the water and wishing he had some more rum.
I really am liking this so far. Excellent work. ^_^
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And Lizzie is starting to catch on... Will's just not as hot as Jack. A nice boy, I'm sure, cute in his way, noble, blah blah blah... but just not Jack.
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