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(Fic) Monsoon, Ch.3

Sep 30, 2006 10:46

Title: Monsoon, Chapter 3 (Finally!)
Author: sage_laurel
Rating: NC/17 - big time. Not for anyone under 18 - contains strong sexual activity.
Pairings: Jack/Elizabeth
Warnings: DMC spoilers.
Disclaimer: I own nothing except the smut in my brain. All belongs to Disney et al.
Summary: It all begins, in rain and lightning... Takes place post-AWE. Prequel ( Read more... )

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Comments 27

hudine September 30 2006, 18:05:24 UTC

Ok first reaction was 'shimpaduollahnsgs' but now I've regained cohearant english...

I love you for writing a beautiful chapter, and the hot sex too :P

What language was that?

sage_laurel September 30 2006, 18:08:20 UTC

Spanish. In my mind, Jack uses spanish to express what he's either too proud or too aroused to express in English.

sage_laurel September 30 2006, 20:10:57 UTC

I imagine he speaks French as well, but my grasp of French is so limited that i fear i would only embarrass myself trying to use it.
I think our Jack is secretly quite an edjucated man, not from books or schooling but from living. He'd need to speak French and Spanish to sail where he has, I think. I imagine he'd pick up some crew here and there that would teach him.

distelhad October 2 2006, 15:42:24 UTC

Definitly! Jack surely is a educated man! Most of it from live but my guess would be that there once was a time he learned from the books :)

Anyhow ... need to review on this hell of a brilliant chapter!

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jesheckahlynn September 30 2006, 18:07:15 UTC

ok what does the spanish or is it french say?

sage_laurel September 30 2006, 18:11:13 UTC

"Tan encantador, tan encantador.. - so lovely, so lovely..

"No hay vuelta de aquí, mi amor.." - there is no return from here, my love..

"Venido para mí, dulzor.." - Come for me, sweetness..

"Mi amor, mi querida - my love, my darling..

jesheckahlynn September 30 2006, 18:12:48 UTC

thank you, its a beautiful language I see a lot of people use it for jack, I have the urge to use japanese in a fic now...
>.>

fid_gin September 30 2006, 18:26:03 UTC

"Venido para mí, dulzor.." - Come for me, sweetness..

Whew! Thank you for translating, I liked it before but knowing what he's saying makes it even hotter!

Very well done, thank you for sharing, and for posting the 3rd chapter before I went freakin' crazy! ;)

cmgacrux September 30 2006, 18:27:09 UTC

I loved it.

pensive1 September 30 2006, 18:51:12 UTC

OMG THE SPANISH.

Baby that was the hottest thing like, ever. Hearing him roll the words out of his mouth.... NNNGGGGHHH

and awwwwww "querida" that is so great, that really gets at the deep affection he has for her ♥

Your writing is very poetic and full of imagery, MANY kudos!

heartjd September 30 2006, 18:52:14 UTC

If I post 20 different comments, will you write more and more? ;)
I love Jack speaking spanish, and I *love* the lightning moments.

sage_laurel September 30 2006, 20:14:20 UTC

Well, when i get lots of good comments, it makes me feel like all the hard work is appreciated, so then I want to write more. But I do have plans for Ch.4, which will be more smut but this time from Jack's POV.
However, I am so drained from cranking out 2 chapters in 12 hours that i need a little break for a few days. The smutbunnies have stomped on me and beaten me to a pulp, and now i need a drink and a nap.