Fic: Torment

[riveroceansea]

Title: Torment
Author: kayljay
Rating: PG
Pairing: Elizabeth and Will rescue Jack from Hell
Spoilers: DMC and AWE
Disclaimer: Not mine
Summary: See 'Pairing'
A/N: Follows "Ache" http://community.livejournal.com/sparrabeth/266767.html

Comments

[heartjd]

I *really* love how you describe Hell...

More Elizabeth-angst over an almost dead Jack!

[riveroceansea]

Thank you. I just couldn't shake that version of hell as soon as I was spoiled for Jack being there.

More Elizabeth-angst soon!

[hudine]

Yup she's not a lady no more.

[riveroceansea]

And this is why I have a problem with Will/Elizabeth. He continues to treat her like a lady despite all she's seen *and* he was the one who taught her to use the sword.

[sage_laurel]

Very nice - the description of hell was very good. I can picture it in my head- the cold beach, the rotting men. Definitely not a place I'd want to stay very long....

[riveroceansea]

I've been telling this from Elizabeth's POV, but I'd love to get inside Jack's head and write his reactions.
Thank you for the feedback.

[flyingpigs_live]

That was amazing. Great descriptions.

[riveroceansea]

Thank you. :Pet my plot bunnies:

[distels_dungeon]

oh please ... please write sequel! This was short but bitter sweet and I need to see the happy ending! Get will away from them ... he annoys me ^^

[riveroceansea]

Elizabeth isn't done with Jack, she has to nurse him back to health! Nor is Jack done with Elizabeth :Evil grin: Will is starting to realize that Elizabeth's angst is not all guilt-related.

[distelhad]

So he is getting the point? *claps* bravo Will, quicker then I thought ... *headdesk*
;)