Spiders

Sep 12, 2006 14:25


Title: Spiders
Author: nelliedances/Miss Ruby Tuesday
Rating: G
Pairings: Jack/Elizabeth
Warnings: Wee ones for DMC and arachnaphobes beware.
Disclaimer: Sure I own it; I also have a great bridge for sale in Brooklyn, if anyone's interested.
Summary: Everyone's afraid of something. Written for jacksmermaid
Status: Complete with options for a companion piece.

Spiders )

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artaxastra September 12 2006, 18:50:48 UTC
Poor Jack! I'll bet he squealed like a little girl! Everyone has their fears, and now she knows what his is.

Excellent character voices! I can really hear them!

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nelliedances September 12 2006, 18:52:35 UTC
Glad you enjoyed that. Yes, I definitely pictured Jack squealing like a little girl.

I imagine having Liz know your fears could be a dangerous thing.

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sixpences September 12 2006, 18:56:36 UTC
Ohh, lovely :D Jack was just perfect, and I love the little exchange over who's going to kill the spider, I laughed very loudly.

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nelliedances September 12 2006, 18:59:13 UTC
I can just picture him pulling the Captain's orders trump card, too, to get out of squashing the spider. In Jack's defense, I think I'd've done the same. Those things are bloody big.

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distelhad September 12 2006, 19:25:16 UTC
I so could see him jumping around in fear the big bad spider could see him and crawl anywhere near ... well, not getting to that again ... have been readin deffinitly too much smut the last couple of days *sighs*

But this was so Banana Sweet! Superb! *huggles* loved it!

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nelliedances September 12 2006, 19:26:39 UTC
There's been a great proliferation of good smut recently, too!

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distelhad September 12 2006, 19:44:41 UTC
aye ... I just fninished "Silk" before readoing this ... guess that must say something *laughes*

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nelliedances September 12 2006, 19:54:02 UTC
Silk.. Guh... Back to a gibbering mess, I go. She's doing an amazing job with it.

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kyra_neko_rei September 12 2006, 19:37:48 UTC
Hehehe . . . nice.

'Cept now she needs a spanking or a light flogging . . . for insubordination. "Captain's orders," remember?

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nelliedances September 12 2006, 19:38:53 UTC
I think my mind just took a turn for the gutter. I know what I can work on now after I finish the companion piece.

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nelliedances September 12 2006, 19:55:18 UTC
I'll email it to you tonight, most likely. Liz talks a good game, but I bet she's got lots of little fears.

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nelliedances September 12 2006, 20:48:36 UTC
Oh, very much so.

There was more thought here, but your pomegranate icon distracted me.

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