Ohh, this is very enjoyable - I love seeing Doumeki and Watanuki from outside perspectives, and bringing in the mundane police is such a clever way to go about this.
That was AMAZING. It was wonderfully paced with well written dialogue. The way you weaved everything together was so clever, I was giggling in glee at every indirect mention of weird happenings around Watanuki. Loved this~ ♥♥♥
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This was good fun, and very well written. The dialogue was especially wonderful, and I loved seeing the boys from an outsider's perspective.
The way the shared eye played into the story was very clever indeed.
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