[Vassalord] Bites [Rayflo/Charley]

Nov 07, 2008 18:11

Speaking of Rickrolls, guys, the other day my friend and I decided we're going to build a house that Rickrolls you. Like, you walk into the bathroom or something and you get locked in until it finishes playing the song with flashy lights and disco balls and stuff like that. Just so you know ( Read more... )

[fanfiction], this's crap see my writing comm instead

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electricfizz November 7 2008, 23:37:43 UTC
That house sounds scary actually. Like something that will scare you the first time, make you laugh the next couple of times, and then you'll be all "NOOOO, STOP IT. DDDD:"

I seriously love what you wrote. Biting is a fetish of mine, so it was highly appreciated reading about it; although I know nothing of the fandom or it's characters. The wording however was nice and your transactions from dialogue to action and back to dialogue is quite smooth. You have a witty way with conversations, don't you? Love it. ♥

WANT MORE FICS LIKE THIS PLZ.

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sparkism November 8 2008, 00:49:04 UTC
Real haunted houses would have nothing on that one. D:

kjfksjfksjf ilu you so much, thank you, bb~! ♥ I don't deserve someone so awesome that reads fic for fandoms they aren't in >.< ♥ ♥
haha, sometimes I think all I can properly do is witty dialogue. The rest is like ohay let's just put something here to fill space. xD



ALSO you should totally read Vassalord it's freaking epic. ...wait, oh god, dilemma, the scanlations are further along than what's out with Tokyopop. DO I READ THEM OR WAIT FOR THE WHOLE VOLUME LIKE A GOOD LITTLE GIRL D:

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electricfizz November 8 2008, 01:06:19 UTC
YOU DO EVERYTHING PROPERLY, SO HUSH. <3

AND WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME IT WAS ABOUT VAMPIRES BEFORE.
OMFG. I MUST READ THIS.
READ IT.

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sparkism November 8 2008, 04:20:39 UTC
>.< ♥

I MENTIONED IT BEFORE. SOMEWHERE. IN MY HEAD.
WHY CAN'T YOU READ MY MIND.
BUT YEAH READ IT.
aaaah no time D: I'll put it at the end of my to-do list

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kageneika March 29 2009, 02:08:02 UTC
Aw, how cute! I stumbled onto this fic from google. XD

Very minor nitpick though... I don't think Charley has real ears anymore, but I could be mistaken. Still a great fic though!

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kageneika March 29 2009, 02:09:40 UTC
And I totally didn't mean to respond to another comment. XD Whoops.

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sparkism March 30 2009, 20:57:25 UTC
guh, Google, why does it never lead to anything useful. *brick'd*

Glad you liked it, though!
...And dfgkjdfg I think you may be right. whoops ahaha. guess this is a good excuse to reread everything again! pffft~ Thank you for pointing it out.

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