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clueless_psycho in spank_palace

Flustered

Apr 13, 2006 20:31

title: Flustered
fandom: Original
characters/pairing: Chris/Sei
medium: ficlet
challenge: random days
A/N: I wrote this last year for a challenge. Never shared this anywhere else. Thought to post it here before random days is over.
Crit: XX, just a little entertainment.

( C’mon, help me take these damn buttons off )

Comments 13

pixee_led April 13 2006, 16:31:36 UTC

Aww... can't cereal be seductive? They could end up doing it in a puddle of milk on the kitchen table. What a surprise for those hungover partygoers when they woke up. *grins*

Really liked it, Duckie-chan.

clueless_psycho April 13 2006, 21:48:09 UTC

Wow, never thought about it. Too bad the challenge must not exceed 1500 words. Perhaps I should write about the cereal too. Should be fun *giggles*

Thankyou *smooches*

lomelinde_sama April 14 2006, 08:12:36 UTC

icon still makes me drooly no matter how long ago I saw it first, A ...

LOL tokagemusume April 13 2006, 17:14:32 UTC

Damned buttons anyway!! See, this is why it pays to wear pullovers! Poor Sei! All wound up and nowhere to go except breakfast... Well, maybe there's a sequel, eh? *wink nudge*

Re: LOL clueless_psycho April 13 2006, 21:49:15 UTC

you think a sequel will be good? I'm looking to write an original, perhaps this one is a good start? Ummmm.

Thankyou *smooches*

blehmeh05 April 13 2006, 22:32:59 UTC

I agree with the other requests for a continuation. These boys beg for closure. *g*

gogoangelgunboy April 14 2006, 05:09:50 UTC

is THAT what they were begging for?

blehmeh05 April 14 2006, 05:56:47 UTC

*raises eyebrow* Why, whatever do you mean?

clueless_psycho April 14 2006, 08:28:40 UTC

I'll think about it ^ ^
thankyou *smooches*

gogoangelgunboy April 14 2006, 05:12:14 UTC

Thanks for the treat, duckie - this was all too easy to picture *grin*
i liked the characters, and, since i did, i think they could use a little more development. and i think you mean chris brushes bangs away from sei's face, right?

just doing my modly duty...

clueless_psycho April 14 2006, 08:30:02 UTC

that's okay. I'll recheck the story later. Maybe I'll write more on this, this suddenly becomes interesting ^ ^
thankyou *smooches*

lomelinde_sama April 14 2006, 08:12:52 UTC

That was very intense !

clueless_psycho April 14 2006, 08:30:40 UTC

thankyou *smooches*