Watchmen Kink Meme 4: The Fab, Fantastic Four

Jan 08, 2010 10:56

Rules of the meme:

1. Anonymously post a pairing and prompt you would like to see written. Since this is a kink meme, there is supposted to be a kink involved, but normal well-written prompts should work just as well.

2. Anonymous will respond to your post and write it for you! Art and such is also acceptable/awesome. Multiple people may respond to ( Read more... )

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4/? (my french is shit, i'm doing my best with google translate and a natural faculty for language) anonymous February 2 2010, 01:57:50 UTC
Apparently the strange sounds are Français, and by the time they reach their destination she knows most of its more important calls. There's the one for being separated from your troupe: Je suis perdu. The one to find people who understood your own calls: Est-ce que n'importe qui parlent anglais?, and many others. Humans are complicated. They put so much of what they're talking about into noises. She had always been a chatterer among the apes, but she's beginning to think it's an inherent quality. In return, she teaches Marie, the younger one, to talk to seabirds. Her accent is poor, but if she ever truly needs to be guided to land or to beg for fish, she can.

Marie cries and hugs her when they land, and she hugs back, and takes the little piece of paper with the girl's name and address. She gets the idea that humans can do this without meaning it, so she makes a point of showing her friend that she will keep it with Dan's. Marie also insists on giving her a little gold ring with a pretty blue stone. Laurel is annoyed at having nothing to give her in return, and carefully braids the ring into her hair so she won't lose it. This place is apparently called Virginia, and the one she needs to get to is New York. Her friends walk her to the train station, where she trades a piece of one of the yellow things for another piece of paper, which will apparently let her get onto another kind of ship that will take her there. It doesn't leave until tomorrow, though, and she cannot bear to sleep indoors anymore. This place is cold and unfamiliar, but trees are trees, and over everyone's objections, she walks off into the woods. It's soothingly green and the snakes understand her when she gives the stranger's hunting call in their language, although they know she's foreign.

She hears crashing and rustling and goes still before creeping up on it. It could be something good to eat, helpfully pre-wounded in the loam. Getting closer, she sees that it's two somethings. Humans, and no good to eat. For a moment she thinks they're about to mate and that she ought to leave them to it, but then she sees that it's all wrong. There should be a bit of struggle, of course. Just to make certain he's paying attention, but this is ugly. The female seems to be covered in dirt at first, then Laurel realizes that her skin is really that color, in sharp contrast to the pale hide of the male, who is being very ill-mannered. Apes get like this sometimes too, but it's not half so dangerous because a girl can scream for her sisters and they'll be there in half a minute, howling and throwing stones. This one fights silently, like she knows no one will listen to her.

Laurel decides that someone ought to stand in for the absent sisters, and bursts from the underbrush to knock him off and pummel him mercilessly. She can feel how strong he is and that just makes her angrier, because it shows how over-matched the girl was. She only means to give him a good drubbing and let him run away, but when he pulls out a gun she breaks his neck without a second thought. The sudden quiet is very loud. The girl is sitting in her torn dress with her hands to her mouth.

"Are you all right?" She's sure this one will speak another tongue. After all, she's even a different color.

She nods. "Y-y-yessum. Are you the Devil?"

At first it almost does sound like another tongue, and then Laurel understands it. "Thought the devil was a man." The girl just trembles, and Laurel sighs. "You need a new dress." She pulls out the rest of the piece she had bought the train ticket with, and puts it in the girl's hand. It closes automatically, as if the hand is sharp enough to know to take a gift even while the mind is in shock. Laurel takes the gun since he doesn't need it anymore, and goes away to find a place to sleep. She hears a sound like ape howls mixed with the barking of seals, but sleeps peacefully as the bloodhounds pass her by.

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OP anonymous February 2 2010, 05:42:17 UTC
Laurie is sooo awesome! Her teaching the Marie girl to talk to seagulls, and putting the ring in her hair, and all of her observations on human= WIN

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Please post it in the update... anonymous February 2 2010, 11:23:37 UTC
Or i may miss this piece of awesomeness =( *going angsty*

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5/? anonymous February 2 2010, 12:36:43 UTC
The next morning she brushes off the leaves and walks back into humanity again. She buys two books at random and goes to board the train. It makes too much noise and it smells horrible. She can tell she's going to hate it, but if it will take her to Dan, she'll put up with it. After the horrible, lurching start, she devotes herself to her books, since her reading isn't as good as it should be and there's nothing else to do.

"Boss, if you don't get back in bed I'll kill you myself."

"Kovacs, I don't have time for this!" He struggles feebly. "She might come looking for me, dammit! A girl raised by apes on a tropical island! Can you imagine someone like that trying to navigate the United States?"

"Might actually do remarkably well." Kovacs shoves him back down onto the pillow and mercilessly spoons medicine down his throat. "Either way, would be put out to find you dead." He says it dubiously, still certain that this girl is either a figment of delirium or someone who would be delighted to find the Dreiberg fortune at her feet.

"You know, there are times I regret hiring you, Kovacs."

"And I accepting the position, boss."

"...That sounds like bad grammar, but I don't think it's technically incorrect."

"Ugly grammar. Functional. Drink this."

"Oh, Kovacs. What would I do without you?"

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What would i do without you? anonymous February 2 2010, 13:54:00 UTC
You bring me sweet, sweet literatur. Fast, good and tasty. Kovacs rules. (In every universe.) But Daniel is just to, to... this is HIS time. He can be so a victorian. Adorable <3

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Re: 5/? tuff_ghost February 2 2010, 15:52:49 UTC
You're piggybacking this with the jooster prompt aren't you :D

You write such a volume of amazing stuff it's scary.

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OP anonymous February 2 2010, 16:42:51 UTC
Eee! I can't wait to see Walter's shock/dissaproving glare when Laurie finally appears! Dammit, Dan is too cute. He's such a good hubby~

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6/? anonymous February 2 2010, 23:15:49 UTC
This place stinks of madness and she can't believe how many people there are. Trying to navigate this mess makes her want to cry, but she abandons her books (one a silly story about a girl who can't decide who to mate with and how the world stops as no on talks sense into her, the other an even sillier story about Englishmen going somewhere very cold and being even less sensible) and goes up to a station agent with her scrap of paper. He gives her directions she memorizes but can't hope to really comprehend, and she thanks him and goes on her way.

She walks for miles and makes at least forty wrong turns, glad that most things are conveniently labeled. She has to steal an orange from a vendor's stall because she doesn't feel like negotiating with the gold bits, which are apparently worth too much for some transactions, but no one sees her and she eats the pallid, pathetic flesh as she walks. She feels like her senses have shut down in self-defense, too much going on on all sides. She has the feeling that there will be predators off the path, but the alleys are dark and comparatively quiet, so she uses them to traverse the city in the general direction of her mate.

She hears them well before they approach. Two of them, clumsy but more graceful for their size than a lot of the people she's seen in civilization. They move to flank her and she's just wrapping one hand around the barrel of the gun to use it as a bludgeon when there are someone else's running footsteps. Everything explodes after that, into a quick, vicious battle. They're a little bigger than she thought, and she's glad to have help. It's over quickly, and she looks at the man who came to her aid. He's very small, and has bright red hair and those speckles some people seem to get in the sun. She cocks her head, feeling a weird sense of recognition.

"Kovacs?"

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Re: 6/? anonymous February 2 2010, 23:29:02 UTC
*will be squealing till part 7 is up*

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The anon who ever glee with joy. anonymous February 3 2010, 00:19:55 UTC
GLEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love you. And which books do you speak of? And now for some Kovacstime... (Even if he use so much bad language here, but i believe if you think where he is from. It´s suits him.)

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7/? anonymous February 3 2010, 09:19:39 UTC
Kovacs is her mate's heart's brother, and though he is uncivil, Laurel doesn't mind. Dan had told her that Kovacs wouldn't like her.

"Truth be told, he just doesn't trust women." Dan sighs, dabbling his feet in the lagoon. "His mother wasn't kind to him."

She sighs, resting her head on his shoulder. "Poor thing. Sometimes apes act as if their children aren't their own. Someone who actually wants them usually takes them."

"We try to do that, but with limited success." He sighs. "You know, his ugly mug is the only thing I miss about New York."

"Hurry up." He growls, irritably stumping up a flight of stairs. "He's been sick for weeks, but he should live." She follows, wanting to see Dan even more than she wants to look around. This is his nest, and sure to be full of interesting things, but there's plenty of time for that later. "Boss!" Kovacs barks. "Visitor!"

"Kovacs, you were the one advocating complete-- Laurel!" He springs out of bed and staggers over. He's thinner and paler than he should be, but he's Dan and she hugs him tightly, purring as she nuzzles her head in against his chest.

"Shouldn't have let you go." She murmurs. The door slams, and neither of them remark Kovacs's exit.

"You're probably right." His voice trembles a little. "You came all this way for me?"

"I would have gone further."

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Re: 7/? anonymous February 3 2010, 13:01:32 UTC
Victorianism! Drama, happy moments, pure love... dear god i adore this fic!

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Re: 7/? anonymous February 3 2010, 18:48:42 UTC
...and then Laurie died from exposure to horrible foreign diseases.

Joking. Cynical humor aside, I love how casually Laurie's proceeding through the modern world. It's fun to see how easily she can equate human interactions to the traits she knows from her time on the island, and her lack of fear will either be a boon or a challenge if she means to stay there with Dan. It'll be interesting to see the culture clash of Laurie in high society.

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author anonymous February 3 2010, 22:21:13 UTC
Hey, I figure if fucking Dan in the first place didn't kill her... XD

Anyway, what you're looking at here is a girl raised by super-smart apes, like Tarzan. Apes are a fuckton like people. Hence, she sort of gets how she's supposed to navigate.

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OP anonymous February 3 2010, 21:35:29 UTC
;^; I am happy forever, anon!! Forever!!

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8/? anonymous February 4 2010, 02:23:04 UTC
He can hear them, and only his sense of decency has kept him from going in there and separating them. Dreiberg doesn't have the energy for this kind of thing. And it's like being a child again, with his mother and her clients down the hall. A low, sobbing groan that could be either of them sends a chill down his spine, and he rolls onto his back, staring at the ceiling. His body is betraying him the way it always does, and he will not be complicit in it. He does the multiplication tables in his head, then runs through them with fractions, 1/4 by 1/12, pieces getting smaller and slipperier and more difficult to handle.

The thump of the headboard against the wall throws him off and he snarls, flinging aside the bedclothes and sitting there, rock hard in the cold air of the room. It doesn't help and he curses under his breath, wishing it were winter. Still, they seem to be done. It's quiet now, and he closes his eyes and thinks of nothing as hard as he can. He finally manages to sleep, curled around the righteous ache of having not touched himself.

"I hope Kovacs didn't hear us."

"He probably did. What's the harm?"

Dan sighs, stroking her hair. "You just don't understand, dearest. He's... hurt? Sick? Something. A lot of us, but he's a bad case."

"Doesn't like women."

"Doesn't like sex, either." She stares, because that's like someone who doesn't like sleep or food. "Well, I suppose he does, poor fellow. But he's ashamed of it. He probably wants as much as anyone, but doesn't want to want."

"...Shame is so strange. Come home with me where we don't have it."

"Believe me, that was the plan."

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