[Crit]
This is a crit post! Tycho is ninjaing in a few places already and I am eager to know if I'm doin it right/wrong so I can correct anything as soon as I can if I need to. Comments are screened.
(This was made for me to adjust to the new schedule for cfud_concrit, where I'll normally be linking my currently outdated crit post for all my characters.)
(This was made for me to adjust to the new schedule for cfud_concrit, where I'll normally be linking my currently outdated crit post for all my characters.)