Jul 23, 2005 18:32
here are some of the songs i wrote tell me what you think by commenting... and dont lie... tell the truth
The Old Days --
verse 1:
I wake up
Ive cried myself asleep again.
My tearstained cheeks
have been like this for weeks and I wish i could go back...
Chorus:
To the old days ,
where everything seemed to go my way.
To the old days,
Where everyday was a good day.
I dream about it, Think about it, Wish about it.
The old days...
verse 2:
My friends, seem so far away,
all those girls just wont let me stay,
I'm in a world all alone,
I feel like i am just unknown
and i wish i could go back....
Chorus:
To the old days,
where everything seemed to go my way,
to the old days,
when everyday was a good day.
I dream about it, Think about it, wish about it
The old days...
bridge:
How come we can't just get along?
Why do you have to run away?
You're not making it easy.
Why can't we all just go back..
[Chorus x2]
Sum:
Back to the old days,
when everything was simpler
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echoes
Whispering --
verse 1:
when i walk into a room,
I feel like its a Tomb,
No one talks to me...
While i sit down on a stool,
They feel like they are just so cool...
chorus:
Stop your Whispering!
Just say it to my face,
I know i will survive
No more whispering!
Say It to me,
maybe Then you'll see,
(quietly) stop your whispering...
verse 2:
I feel like im on display
Like im every one else's clay,
why does it have to be so hard?
It seems like im just a different card.
I just wanna say to you...
[Chorus]
Bridge:
I see your hand go up,
And your eyes dart straight at me,
I'm Not as stupid as you think!
I'll never be like you!
[Chorus 2 times very loudly]
Sum:
I have feeling too,
Don't You know i can hurt as much as you?!
[Chorus]
ok comment and tell me what ou think.. thanks and agaiin.. dont lie