sorry i didn't lj cut this right away...

[soy_un_higado]

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[vraimenteuse]

good jorb mike. this is interesting. to nitpick, you use the word "exiting" a lot, a fact which i only noticed because it confused me--i am stupid and initially thought it was "exciting." Wasn't even close on that one, huh. i really like it, but whenever i read your writing i always wonder what you think is so horrible.

[soy_un_higado]

hahaha, thank you lauren. I think a lot of things are horrible. writing is just an easy way to purge the horrible things from me.

i will investigate this "exiting" business

[anonymous]

curious

[soy_un_higado]

cool

[_younghollywood]

"I kept walking. I went home, put away the cigarettes and lighter in a drawer, drank the water, and went to bed, where god was waiting for me. I spoke to him briefly. I told him about how I had prayed once today that it would not rain. I thanked him for letting it not rain. I slept, and the next morning the sidewalks were wet from the night before."

that's my favorite
I don't know why it just is
and it's good.

[soy_un_higado]

caitlyn! hi! how have you been??? thanks for the comment, I'm glad you liked it.