Because You Can't Burn Ice or Ash

[sour_idealist]

Simple writing practice, working mostly on things like voice and atmosphere.

Comments

[vgdivision]

Very good, very interesting. I'd be interested to see further development on this story: more background on the main character, that sort of thing.

[sour_idealist]

Ohmigoshsomebody'sactuallyreadingmystuf!

...Sorry. Thank you very much; it means a lot to me. I've been considering doing just that, so thank you for your encouragement.