FIC: "Green Curry" 1/1 (Sequel to "This is Not a Pick Up Line")

[soundczech]

I wrote it, but I kind of wish I hadn't, because this is probably the sappiest I'll ever get. And the porniest. I've never written gay porn before. My english teachers would be so proud.

He tasted like green curry.

Comments

[drdawn]

Great stuff! Thanks for writing.

[wrenlet]

Awwww, see... I was so in the mood for sappy and porny, so I love it ;)

so he traps Justin on the bed with his long limbs and the force of his own will, and together, they drift off to sleep

*squee*

Awww- This is just beautiful & sexy & sensual & tasty...

[viola69]

Wonderful picture of reunion sex after 12 years- (although, Aghhhh!!! 12 years apart??!!) Love all the little details- the green curry, Brian's ponderings on Justin's hair- & the heartache of what he Didn't know about Justin during their time apart, Brian's conversation with Justin's cock, Justin's ponderings on Brian's beauty & Their eyes speak of shared memories of sweaty backrooms and this very bedroom, Justin’s mother’s bathroom, Brian’s Jeep, Debbie’s backyard, Michael’s stairwell. Those moments when the teasing touches and sly glances grew too much and they had to escape, find the closest thing to privacy available. --love all that this conveys of their past relationship so succinctly. You do a great job of saying alot without belaboring the details.
Ok, must get on with my day- & suddenly want to go find some take-out curry.

Squee!

[mintwitch]

Happy, happy Mint! This is like a little present all neatly wrapped to make up for my disastrous life. Thank you for reunion porn, thankyouthankyouthankyou!

[altricial]

I really suck at giving feedback so I will just "*burst into tears for their love!*" instead.