Inevitable Bonds: Chapter 1- Maka's Problem

[elrickeyblade]

Story Title: Inevitable BondsChapter Title: Maka's Problem
Chapter #: 1
Rating: PG to T
Summary: When they were first partnered, it was amongst a dark, eerie song played on piano keys.  But what about when they had first met?
Author's Notes: First actual chapter whoot! It's actually kind of difficult for me to write this story because of my extreme

Comments

[nolli3]

ahhh this is very good~ !!
I think I'm in love with it already. I also read "The Dreamscape" and think the whole idea of Soul as a transfer is a great idea. I'm really glad you kept Maka in character too. She doesn't turst men... for now right? That's were Soul will come in! <3 hehe, I can't wait for your next chapter.

[elrickeyblade]

Awww, thanks! I read your SoulxMaka story on ff.net as well, and I really think it is great! I am really pleased that you commented on Maka's characterization, because it was one of the things giving me the most trouble with this chappie. -_- Anyways, thanks so much for the wonderful comment! b^^d

P.S.: I also can't wait for your next chapter. 8D

[desfinado]

I like this! It is a sort of area of the plot that we don't see much of, and I am endlessly curious about how exactly people determine who their partner will be or what that initial period of learning to match soul wavelengths together is like. Maka and Soul end up doing EVERYTHING together - class, living, fighting, etc... so I look forward to exploring that transition time! This is great, your characterization is really well done. More please!

[elrickeyblade]

WOW, thanks! I'm actually very pleased that you commented on my characterization, because it was actually that that was giving me the most problems. :/ I kept on wondering to myself, "Would Maka have been like this?" or, "Oh wait, Soul DEFINITELY wouldn't have been like this" and stuff like that. I almost despaired of it and was about to erase the entire chapter today, but decided to be brave and post it anyway. Thanks for the encouragement! b^^d

P.S.: Yeah, same here about the curiosity. Hopefully I will be able to satisfy that as I journey through the makings of this story- even I don't know what'll pop up next :P

Toodles~

[spiritualenergy]

This looks interesting! I haven't seen this kind of thing played out before, and I'm looking forward to more. ♥

One tiny thing though... would you mind putting this behind an LJ cut? It's kind of long and messing with my friend's page. ): Thanks!

[elrickeyblade]

Awww, thanks for the nice comment!

And yeah, heheh...*bashful* You can tell I'm pretty new at this stuff...I tried editing it the best I could, so hopefully your friend's page is okay now :)

[spiritualenergy]

Yes, that's much better! Thank you for fixing it. :)

[pikabot]

I think you need to re-assess your LJ-cut skills.

[elrickeyblade]

*is even more bashful* heh, yeah...I know. I'm still trying to figure out this stuff, heheh...*scratches head*

I did edit this entry to the best of my abilities, though, so opefully everything went well and you were able to enjoy this chappie. :)

[teukster]

Hmmm... I like this fanfic. :3 You did a nice job on this chapter, especially with the characterization, so I'm definitely looking forward to your next chapter~ ^^

[elrickeyblade]

*blushes* Aww, thanks! I really am glad that you, along with good number of others, had commented on the characterization- that was what was giving me the most problems! Even now, as I am typing up this next chapter, I am running into problems with whether or not Maka and Soul would really *SPOILER TAG SPOILER TAG SPOILER TAG* ^^;;; Heheh...

Hopefully this next chapter will be ready by Friday as well. But once again, thanks for reviewing! b^^d