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soucieux

[01/01] A Brilliantly Languid Affair

Apr 27, 2007 09:36

title. A Brilliantly Languid Affair
pairing. akame (je)
rating. pg
summary. central park in wintertime is beautiful, i bet.
author's note. before jin came back.
word count. 00510

( It's a brilliantly languid affair. They're in the park together--Central Park--and the sun is far too bright and the sky is far too grey. The snow surrounds them, hardens into ice and they laugh at one another when they take turns slipping on an invisible path. )

fandom: je, drabble and/or unfinished/abandoned, pairing: akame

Comments 14

aysha_aka April 27 2007, 13:54:51 UTC

sweet
cute
Love
akame
I like it X3

soucieux May 13 2007, 21:44:01 UTC

I'm glad. :D Thank you for commenting~

shabzilla April 27 2007, 14:08:30 UTC

that was really cute!1 I liked it, especially how unassuming it is-- just sweet and like awwww best friends back together without being obnoxious. Am I making sense? this makes sense in my head of what it ~*~feeeeeels~*~ like...

soucieux May 13 2007, 21:44:42 UTC

SHABZ, ARE YOU ME? That is exactly what I felt. Like ~~~friendship~~~ and all that jazz. Thank you for your comment. I can always depend on you for one. :DV ♥♥♥

shabzilla May 13 2007, 22:07:56 UTC

I THINK I LIVE IN YOUR BRAIN PART TIME. It is more interesting than mine. ♥

problemchild518 April 27 2007, 14:54:23 UTC

ooh! i found a typo!! "question that dies in the cold airr." there's 2 r's there. anyways i really like this =). simple and sweet.

soucieux April 27 2007, 14:57:13 UTC

Oh, thanks!

Glad you liked it. ;D

kawaiisho April 27 2007, 15:00:21 UTC

that
was
soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
sweet

love it...

have some hot chocolate (after writing something about New York in winter you have to warm up)

soucieux May 13 2007, 21:45:13 UTC

Awww, I'm glad you thought so and liked it. It really does evoke that feeling of wanting hot chocolate, right? Too bad it's really hot here right now.. XD

snowqueenofhoth April 27 2007, 15:22:52 UTC

Whoa. WHOA. Hold up a minute! *flails*

This was-

This was-

*tries again*

AKAME LIKE YAY. But in a real and good way. Friends, I mean. And just. *not making much sense*

Okay, sorry.

soucieux May 13 2007, 21:45:24 UTC

REALISTIC?

REALLY?

PREEEEENS.